Please don’t take what I say too harshly, but I’m going to try and list things I personally think can be done better.
The name of the comic is super long winded which makes it hard to remember and even read seeing as tapas just adds a “...” and cuts it midway. Even just “Humanity’s in the scrapyard” would’ve given us the exact same info as “The story of how humanity has thrown itself into the scrapyard”.
Some of the tags would’ve honestly turned me off just by nature, “surprise anal sex”, “trash”?
The Font you used in the icon makes it seem like the story is romantic-NSFW based, not gorey or dark, even moreso with the PDA-like poses.
The disclaimer at the beginning of the comic seems unnecessary and can be put in the description instead.
The typesetting at the beginning of the first update should be done with a font, not handwriting, as the handwriting reads as kind of unprofessional and changes weirdly within itself. It also clashes pretty weirdly with the typesetting that was done with a font.
The text is also pretty huge, and bolded which I don’t think is necessary.
You also have a few minor typos/grammar issues, like in 2-3 “What a nonsense.”
The fighting panels kind of lack energy... I feel like using more closeups, changing up the angles, etc, can help make them seem more dynamic!
The part in the end of chapter 1 where MC explains all of what happened in the chapter seems kind of like a weird choice, especially as it’s quite clearly understood even without that? It reads kind of unnatural, why would he tell the girl what she just did to him, just to add a line at the end about himself without explaining that, the only thing we Don’t know yet?
“Motherhacker” gave me personally kind of an eyeroll moment. Actual cursing wouldve had a proper impact there.
Putting the girl lead in a situation where it’s like.. rape to rape, makes her feel kind of like a sterotypical “femme fatale” character (based on her reactions), especially with the red hair and black latex design.
Gotta admit I didn’t read “cyber eyes”, or “Augmented reality games”, the extras( basically, It’s a lot of text and it’s not yet been a full two chapters so I don’t really feel attached or super interested in the world yet?
There’s also like, 11 extras episodes almost one after another? (This is what would’ve made me unsub, personally) They can definitely be compiled together or cleared out. Your readers are there to read a story, but over half your updates aren’t plot related content