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HNLEE 2015-10-18 03:17:43 UTC #136

This is quite good, I really like the third panel, the background and the pose of the guy is very nice. The dialogue is quite good too, it gives the reader a sense of whats to come and builds anticipation. I think the shading could be better though. The shading is a little unnatural, try making your brush edges a little sharper. Also the robe of the girl is a bit too embossed and the hair is also also too embossed at the tips but very flat on top. I also think the watermark is a bit distracting, maybe it'd be better to make it more subtle so it doesn't overshadow your work. The facial expressions and anatomy is spot on though! I also like the cute sign you drew in the third panel ^^

Latest update from Sundaze
I actually updated four pages but this one was the most substantial.

samuelzarate7 2015-10-18 07:02:42 UTC #137

@nice coloring, keep it up!

One of my fave pages of my comic http://tapastic.com/series/Fighter-Dan

atlas 2015-10-18 16:24:05 UTC #138

Awsome fight scene! I love a montage shot

Latest page of my comic Beasts of Ushin:

HeSerpenty 2015-10-19 07:00:26 UTC #139

I love your line work! Very nice use contrast and whatnot--- very pleasing to the eye. Hahaha and I also love their expressions! Awesome page!

This week in Serpents Merek, Barron, and Ryder compete for who is the biggest fool on this page! I personally can't decide X)

Jewe11s 2015-10-20 00:03:02 UTC #140

Firstly, I really like the pacing of your panels @HeSerpenty. This page made me giggle (Guy runs by laughing like Nelson from the Simpsons.) I'm really curious now about the rest of the story! Also, Your colouring is really nice and the backgrounds are a good balance of 'clear and detailed' and 'simple and non-distracting'.
Now excuse me, I'm going to go read the rest of your comic

Here are my latest page(s) (They don't make sense without one another. You can choose to comment on only one if you'd prefer to be fair )

SkipperWing 2015-10-20 00:18:55 UTC #141

Aw, thanks! I know I don't have to, but I like that you connect the panels by having elements of the next panel (Rei's hair, Max's speech bubbles) pop into the previous one. It gives the reader's eye an automatic place to go and leads them across the page. Also, I like that you play with speech bubbles and that they aren't all the same format in order to denote who's speaking and how (out loud vs. thoughts). Good job!

quietsnooze 2015-10-20 20:55:45 UTC #142

@Jewe11s I am LOVING your lighting effects, holy crap! They must have taken forever to get right, and it works perfectly! And it helps flow through the pages really well. Great job! __ Now I have to go see how this links in to everything else!

Here's my latest page! Perfect for any Potterheads in here.

infectedbloodcomics 2015-10-20 22:01:10 UTC #143

Really awesome art, fun and communicative facial expressions and great coloring! Awesome job!

In The Green-Eyed Sniper, we find out more about Sekhmet's past as a war criminal.

atlas 2015-10-20 22:59:40 UTC #144

Interesting panel composition and I like that overhead shot in the first panel. You pull off the Eerie sci-fi look well!

My newest from SweetGum:

60Six 2015-10-21 00:57:42 UTC #145

I was actually hoping to comment on one of your pages earlier in this thread but someone beat me to it! Your style is so cute and charming and the format of your comic is definitely recognizable. Just the fact that you go with something warmer like brown instead of black gives me a sorta cozy feel when I look at it. Maybe this sounds a little weird, but it makes me happy in the same way things like Animal Crossing do!

Here's the latest page of City of Blank!

Benzy 2015-10-24 20:38:38 UTC #146

@Riko
I LOVE the coloring and over all look of your comic. Honestly it's what I'm trying to strive for in my own but failing at. And that food! The flow is really nice too, I'll have to subscribe and find out more.

This is the latest page for Discount Religion. I'm experimenting with the line and color.

atlas 2015-10-25 02:19:51 UTC #147

@Riko I thank you, Ma'am, for your wonderful comments on my little comic! How you describe your feelings as you read it reassures the motivations I had when I started that comic!

@Benzy It's not very often that I would describe grown men as large as that guy as "cute", but that's what he is! A gentle giant who knows what he's capable of, but is also SO polite about it. lol And excellent art as always!

My latest from Beasts of Ushin:

60Six 2015-10-25 03:24:59 UTC #148

@Benzy Oh gosh, thank you so much! I actually like the lighting in your comic a lot though (And especially your drawing style)! But if you're using photoshop, I'd be happy to show you sort of my layers or something to give some ideas on how to go about your coloring!

Benzy 2015-10-25 04:02:01 UTC #149

I use Clip Studio, but I could probably apply some Photoshop stuff to it. I would be THRILLED to see your layers and process though, so if you are willing I'd love to connect and talk about comics and art and such. Or you can make a comic thread, I'm sure a lot of people would like to see that kinda stuff since it's super helpful.

Cielle 2015-10-26 04:41:35 UTC #150

@atlas I think you do a really good job capturing expressions on this page! Especially that fourth panel. He looks so smarmy! What a little punk. Your style reminds me of traditional manga, particularly Rumiko Takahashi (Ranma 1/2, Inuyasha, Urusei yatsura). Nicely done!

Here's the latest page of Reus, wherein we get a sneak peek into Rei's arrival in Regaia.

HeSerpenty 2015-10-26 05:18:19 UTC #151

That's a really nice establishing shot page! I am always intimidated by shots like this because detailed environments are NOT my strong suit-- so I am always super impressed when other people pull it off! I love all all the lights <33

This week in Serpents..... more shenanigans, can Wex fix it, aaaaand just what WILL happen to Merek if Hizruk is really missing? D:

Kecreed 2015-10-28 08:21:27 UTC #152

@HeSerpenty I enjoy the character designs as well as that mighty creature the soldiers are riding on. I must admit I was a tad confused on which to read first in the panel after "can you fix it?" I read the next panel on the right first and got confused in the panel with the grates though in the end I figured it out.

Here's another sheep related joke.

mariusthered 2015-10-28 12:02:05 UTC #153

@Kecreed, I enjoyed the gag and the overall look of the page, the only advise i would say is maybe a little legs.

this is the new page of Tales from swipe city and to be honest i was glad to see the end of it, it was one of those fiddly pages, plot wise it's now starting to come together in the first season...

atlas 2015-11-01 17:44:48 UTC #154

An intriguing page! I like how the dialogue turns from ordinary chit-chat, to how the cop's wife help set an alleged murderer free. It's like seeing something out of network television! The lineart fits the subject matter quite well, I must say.

Here's my newest page from Strike Pup:

Alexandritea 2015-11-01 21:40:48 UTC #155

I really like your linework, and i really adore the style you're using.
you also have some very pretty ladies in these panels c:
the dialogue got me a bit interested of what was going on exactly.
so i checked it out c: it looks really interesting.

Here is the latest page of my comic In the Name of the Creator.