Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[johndanims]

Oh Yeah!

So I started a series of drawings that are requests. The first is for someone named David. He wanted a very happy dog, I figured out why a dog would be so happy.

[mariusthered]

um yer the dog looks happy.. needs work me thinks.

here is the latest page from Talesfromswipecity Ninja Attack! ( and she hates men! subscribe and follow to find out why!)

[Aspie_Gamer]

Nice design on the girl warrior

Here's my most recent page of Life of an Aspie from yesterday

A quick jab is taken at social media "feminists"

And here's the previous page for some context

[Cielle]

@toadsteroven I think I don't understand the joke >.< what do feminists have to do with this guy getting punched in the face? I might not be the target audience for this kind of humor haha. I think your expressions do a good job of conveying your character's personalities. I think reviewing some proportions tutorials would really help take your art to the next level! Here's one from Nsio, who does a tooonnn of really helpful tutorials. Keep up the good work ^.^

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Here's the latest page of Reus

[agentfink]

@Cielle I really like the expressions of the girl (and breaking the 4th wall with the bubbles comment!) I really like the use of color of the speech bubbles to differentiate the characters. My only comment is the lack of the speech tails in the first few panels. Though I understand who is talking, I am curious as to why they are present in the final panels (but not the first 3?) Good job all around

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Issue 1, Page 7 of The Pale

[Kaos_Comics]

Great line work! So clean.

Here's this weeks Juvies
Back when The Matrix was all the buzz!

[HitoriEdo]

@Kaos_Comics Ah. The Matrix. That's nostalgia for you! And the comedy is clearly enunciated in expression and action.
If I were to critique anything it would be type setting. It may only be my personal preference, but it looks messy when text stretched to the end of the speech bubble. Otherwise, good page!

Here are my updates! Enter the castle of WORLDS:

[BraveHeartTatsumaki]

I feel like I'm going to be sucked into that door, the effect in both is great and makes you think "what's inside this castle?" Really amazing job :)!

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And here's the latest in Final Light

[efdvorsky]

Oh gosh the adventure with the horse-monster continues! I like the paneling, it works well! And the use of grays really evoke the feelings you're trying to work with, good job!!

Here's the most recent from Cosmic Fish! (it even has a little tune and e'rything)

I'm also working on another comic on the side which thank goodness it doesn't take me as long to work with so it should be up soon OTL

[AffectedMind]

@efdvorsky I definitely can tell I love the coloring : D Especially the environment I always have trouble with that, but yours blends perfectly.

Here's the latest page of Bite Me.

[mappypaint]

@AffectedMind There's no dialogue on this page so it's kinda more of showing than telling. The black and white is neatly done and the lines are clean. I also use those beams on the backgrounds specially when one of my characters realizes something all of a sudden.XD Very nice page. ^u^

Here's the latest page of U-Speed.

[mariusthered]

@mappypaint love the bully pose and the glass work.
this is the last of three pages i have posted today showing that season two of Talesfromswipecityis very different to season one.

[atlas]

Man, brutal action. A cool and unforgiving cyborg ninja assassin! Like the poses she makes, for sure

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Here's My latest from Beasts of Ushin:

[Kaos_Comics]

@HitoriEdo Thanks dude! Glad you like it. Yeah these were done almost 8 years ago when I first started been serious about doing comics. The art, layout and text all improve over time I promise LOL!!! If you want please feel free to check out my ongoing comic book series Super-Dud.

[Kaos_Comics]

@atlas I'm thinking his thunderclap is about to bring on some big bad beast?

Page 14 of Super-Dud #2 has uploaded!
Enjoy!

[TallyB]

@Kaos_Comics oh this page looks cool, i like the way the action has been drawn and the colour. I'll have to check out the rest of it so i can learn more about what's doing on!

http://tapastic.com/episode/240649 Here's the latest page of my comic Bajo-mano, a comic about a small town police station

[Jrej]

A really dreamy atmosphere! I like the pale colors and flirty dialogue. Very well done!
Just from this page I can't believe it's about a small police station...

Here's the latest Shades Of Men. Never seen Lev talk that much!

[WednesdayAsh]

Oh the color panel got me by surprise a little grammar slip up can be jarring for a native speaking reader...I think a close up on the hand of the colored panel is more approriate as the background of that panel doesnt really establish anything the previous panel hasn't already nice work dude

This is my newest page, well I wrote it ahha, the talented AsteRiesling did that
http://artsteriesling.tumblr.com/

Well...Tell me what you think!

Thats just part of the first chapter
Click here and subscribe to check out our adventures!
http://tapastic.com/series/cloverlines

Thank you

[Jrej]

Thanks for the comment @WednesdayAsh
I know out of context the colored panel could take you by surprise but only my main character is in black and white. The previous page is an establishing shot of it all.

Anything grammar-wise you would change? Can't put the finger on it!

Love your page by the way! Very colorful!

[WednesdayAsh]

"I know I haven't been a good friend"? perhaps, it seems like yr using more words than need be there...
"Together we will have eyes everywhere" cause im assuming that hasent happened yet?