@myimaginarypals --- it's a really funny and accurate depiction of cold feet. The art style's really fun for a gag strip too, with a lot of expression on the characters' faces that's very specific. The coloring is really fun as well.
The only suggestion I would offer you has more to do with lettering and editing. The capitalization and punctuation isn't very standard, or consistent. You've a misspelled word in the final panel: "altar". And the lettering's not really centered within the speech bubbles, which I think might help give it a more clean and polished look. It might be worth having a friend or someone help edit for those little details in the lettering, because the art and material is very good, and I think that small improvement might help you reach a bigger audience.
Also, totally put a hyper-link in your posts to your comic book, and then one on your forum profile too! That will help bring more traffic to your comic. : )
And for something entirely different, here's the latest page of my mystery/horror space opera, Atonement. : ) It's our first fully single panel page thus far, and is sort of a punctuation point for the rhythm of the opening narrative of the story.
