Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[agentfink]

@jonno Nice panel flow, I like the overall feel of the DJ talking into the air waves. I understand what you are going for on the 4th panel, but I wonder if there is a stronger way to do it (?) If the sky is a continuation of panel 5, maybe just combine the panels. If you want that nice shot in panel 5, maybe have a close up of the DJ talking into the mic for panel 4... give the words some context/art within the panel instead of sky. Also, if the DJ is talking in panel one, his word bubble shouldn't be a "radio" bubble (with the zig zag). Other than that, I think it's a great mood you have going here! Good work!

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The Pale 1.22

[jonno]

why thank you sir! i completely missed the bubble thing in the first page, didn't even bat an eye towards that. i will definitely keep your advice for panels like #4 in mind

[naughtyjourneycomic]

The latest page!

The Night Where I Died(Finally released!)

Gaurdian Reaper(Finally Released!)

L-O-N-E-R

[mariusthered]

@naughtyjourneycomic thats a very long page, not sure about the blue speak bubbles but its all very colorful.

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my New page today's Talesfromswipecity

[Aspie_Gamer]

"And then I'm gonna build a wall to keep people I don't like out!"

Life of an Aspie Chapter 2, page 6

[Axx]

@Toad_Sta_Ovn I was about to say something about the sizing and readability of your text but i took a sec to actually look at the comic and nevermind! not a problem at all. um, the only note i think could be helpful is, some of your composition makes it seem to read left to right instead of right to left - just stuff like how shes looking to the right in the first panel and the diagonals made by the teachers arm and the door in perspective making strong graphic lines leading the eye.
I hope thats helpful atall.

Here's my last page of the last part of Arcturus chapter 2 - crazy scanner problems but i'm kinda ok with the scrappy look :3

[mariusthered]

"And then I'm gonna build a wall to keep people I don't like out!"

lol , no my crime boss has all his own hair!

[atlas]

I like the grainy-ness of the nighttime sky and I like the hairstyle of your pink haired girl!

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Latest from Beasts of Ushin:

[phen]

@atlas These lines are so sharp and slick! Not enough do I see strong black and white comics around -- you have the confidence and technical skill to execute crisp, detailed sequences. I really dig the textures and toning, too, it fits within each frames mood well. Plus, that panoramic panel featuring the environmental shot? Bloody stellar. And your varying lineweights are eye-catching as heck and the character expressions pull the eye around to the action perfectly. Ace work, yo, cheers!!

Here's today's update, page 53 of There's No Such Thing as Jason -- I.T.! I'm having a blast bringing in these heavier elements to the characters and I really hope I'm able to execute the sense of ill well enough in the backgrounds. ;u;

[Kaos_Comics]

Creep factor 10! LOL I like your style of drawing very cool.

Super-Dud's back cover.

[Gaspode12]

Nice page. Super Dud stands out well and the foreshortening on the pointing hand looks good. Think there might be a slight spelling error; should possibly read "If you are BEING bullied" rather than "If you are BEEN bullied". Other wise good job!

Here is the latest All Fingers and Thumbs.

[azureXtwilight]

That looks quite good! A little more shading can help you bring out the color more!

Latest from Re:Set

[TheVoidchildProject]

Wow, that's a solid artstyle. Both the dialogue, the demeanor of the characters and drawings give me the feeling classic manga-inspiration. I especially like the background and whether that was your intention or not I get the sense of a very bustling almost Vegas'ish kind of setting.

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This is my first plug here on Tapastic. Happy to be here. I've participated in threads like this before which I think are a great addition to any comic community. My comic is called "Voidchild" and you can find the first episode here. Be wary that I'm a developing artist so the first chapter is a bit rougher than my current style, which is still in development. I'm having lots of fun learning though so I don't mind.

My latest page:

[Cielle]

@TheVoidchildProject I can't read your whole comic right now because of the update, but this page looks really nice! It has a lot of intrigue and atmosphere. The contrast between the lullaby and what's happening in the scene really pull you in and make you want to know more. Keep up the good work! As soon as the Tapastic update is finished, I'm gonna give the rest of your comic a read ^.^

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Here's the latest page of Reus.

[myimaginarypals]

@cielle Very nice artwork. Very expressive and I love ther bg in the last panel.

My newest is
https://tapastic.com/series/My-Imaginary-Pals

[Jrej]

Love the humor. It's great strip. Simple and efficient.
You really nailed the expression and setting the mood.
I'll definitely have to check more of your stuff!

Here my new page for Shades Of Men.
The bust starts... But in the wrong room! Arrrgg

[genjiOtori]

I like how lively your page is. Even though I only read this page the characters seem loveable and convincing. Also I like how it turns out they got the wrong room
They all have a personality that reflects on their looks. Good work on that

Here's my latest page of my manga Requiem It's an action scene I put my whole heart and effort into. Hope you enjoy =)

[Axx]

@genjiOtori That looks gorgeous, and so elegant. I love how well you've used the b/w vs mid tones to differentiate the characters in all the movement. I think the layout style suits the scrolling format too. I think your hard work really shows (:

here's Arcturus latest page - since the sites been down we're not at the end of chapter 3 !

I really love writing these girls

[TheVoidchildProject]

@Axx wow, what a unique style you've created. Something that pops out at you immediately. I feel weird for trying to give constructive criticism to someone who's obviously a cut above my own ability. The only thing that sticks out immediately is that the black-haired girl in the second panel looks condensed. Like she's been resized horizontally in photoshop or the like. I really love the atmosphere and especially in the final panel which removes all unnecessary objects to focus on the characters and what they're doing instead.

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This is a bit late, because of the Tapastic outage, but the final page of part three of chapter one of Voidchild is up. I'm on holiday but I'll get right on the final part of chapter one when I get back!

[TrustyShamrock]

i like the spooky look of it! it kinda reminds me of a tarot card. whatevers going on with the bottom of her robe dealio looks really cool

heres my newest page from Robo Hole. gettin a good ol fashioned robot fight started here P: