Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[Cielle]

@ArtistHan interesting use of perspective on this page! I'm digging it. One thing however is that the images don't line up from page to to page. It's very slight, so it's hard to tell if it's intentional or not. If it is intentional, perhaps exaggerating it a bit more would make it obvious. On the other hand, if the pages are supposed to line up, you might need to tinker with the pages a little. I was also a little confused at first that the boy's hair kept switching from black to white and then back again, but I can see why you did it. I think it's fine to do on occasion, but I would recommend saving that color inversion technique for select, really important moments. But anyway, good work! Keep it up ^.^

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Here's the next page of Reus. I'm not entirely satisfied with this page (I know it needs some work...), so I'm anxious to get some feedback on it haha. ha.

[jecie]

Love the costumes on the characters. Especially the female.the perspectiveswth the checkered floor gives off a disorientating feel to the page. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for.

Good expressions also, really helps what they are thinking even without reading the dialogue

Here's mind from http://tapastic.com/series/Carnivore-of-Flesh

[infectedbloodcomics]

Really great colors and nice panels. It reminds me more of single illustrations/paintingd than a comic, however it's really nicely done!

Today, in The Green-Eyed Sniper, things get soft

[Volucris]

Oh my, I just went and read the last page (and some more) and things are getting really dramatic! If I'm just giving feedback for that page only, I love the different perspective you use, the contrast in the middle, and of course the way you heighten the tension!
(Please don't kill Sekhmet! Ahhhhh)

Great work!

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This is my latest page from Fox Rain, after I finished I forgot to add trees... ugh - please excuse my empty background!

[HNLEE]

EDIT: omg i must have mistaken this thread for the other newest page thread without commentary
so sorry i didnt comment on the one above, i'll do it now

@Volucris Rox rain has a very dramatic feel to it. The main girl has a good design and the expressions fit perfectly into the scene. The white outlines also help bring focus to the characters. Overall a great job, sorry I was not able to do this sooner.

[ragraphx]

Great use of colors and lighting.. You set the scene and mood very nicely HNLEE.

Here's the newest page from Mighty Glad
Verah blasts the fierce Leowolf running at her and Glad!!!

[Waterdrain]

Oh wow! I really like your use of colors and effects ragraphx, I also like the way you broke up the panels too C:
Here's the latest page for my comic Out of the Ordinary

[toherrys]

Oohh excellent use of black space and contrasts! Cool character design too and a nicely drawn bike.

Here be my latest update to Unknown Lands

[Alexandritea]

@toherrys I really love the way you draw faces, and you have a fantastic sense of colours
and shading (but i suppose the shading is a part of the colour picking xD) I have seen a lot of your
works and i admire every one of them, even the sketches o3o you have a real talent <3

This is the latest page i've made of my comic In the name of the creator

[toherrys]

Oh my, thank you!! ;-;

[CaptainJuuter]

@Alexandritea I have seen your comic around before, and I have to say the concept/story of it seems very interesting and original. Your art is very detailed and I love the way you've gone about coloring and shading. I noticed you also used/included some alien type scripture/text which was very cool. Did you create that all yourself? if so did it take a lot of time? how did you base the design?

As for my latest page page it is a double -update, my story is Lance x Saber and Here is the last page (it is an adventure-fantasy story)

[mappypaint]

@CaptainJuuter I'm a fan of your comic and I really like the style and colors of it. On the last page, it really shows the immediate bonding of the group as they start on their new adventure together.:)

Latest page for u-speed is this one...

last time I posted here it was part 1, and now its part 6.XD

[keii4ii]

@mappypaint Aw, is he blushing in the second panel? ^^ I like that you're not skimping out on the environment/backgrounds. And not just stuff like the buildings or the plant; drawing those stripes on the shirt of that one background character, for example, shows that you put a lot of work into this.

A rare incidence for Heart of Keol: a single-image update. Usually my updates get chopped up into multiple images because they get rather long! ...Or tall, as the case may be!

[mappypaint]

@keii4ii Oh yes he is, waiting for his first ever "date". ^u^ I like taking my time on backgrounds, and that background character is one of the guest OCs so I made sure I put all the details on them but hopefully not to much that it draws away the focus on the main characters.

[Alexandritea]

@CaptainJuuter Thank you for the kind words <3
And i created the text for the pages myself, but when i do create them, i
use shapes and combination that makes sense (in my head xD). and i
also think of repeating the same words again like you would with
english words like "you" "I" and things alike.
and it can take quite a long time to make, because i possibly try too hard xD

[earthbendercharlie]

@keii4ii Nice page. It's pretty spooky but majestic at the same time. I have no idea what your series is about but I think its cool that just by looking at the glow I can get a feel for it. And sometimes its better to feel than to be given context! I think it would have been even stronger if the man in the shot had some of the pink glow highlighted on the top of his body. Just a little suggestion

A couple days ago I posted the 8th character (out of 10) in my little Naruto Spin off series, Konoha Delinquents. Not much going on in these aside from just introducing the characters one by one so, here he is

[johndanims]

Nice compositions, I like the shading and I like how the last panels get wavier as the character gets scarder. Helps subtly create a more dynamic feel to what's happening.

Here's my latest page to Working Doodles, and the first instalment of the miniseries, Drunk Superheroes:

[atlas]

Your page really got me thinkin': What WOULD Spider-man do when he's incredibly drunk?! lol

Here's the latest page of my comic, Strike Pup:

[Cielle]

@atlas the lines are very clean, and the tones are nice too, especially on the last panel. I'm a little confused about what's going on between panels 5-8, but I assume it makes sense in the context of the story ^.^;

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here's the most recent page of Reus. Mini-summary of the situation: This is a story Max (the red-head) is telling someone about her technique to hunt down a vigilante. She's trying to get information from a criminal who the vigilante captured, so she told said criminal she's his "number 1 fan" (but it's a lie ofc).

as a side-note, I'm happy this thread has seen some revival lately. yayy~~

[PotooGryphon]

I like this thread a lot. The "Comment on the one above first" really helps keep it more than just a spam and run thread. So I'm bring it back XD

@Cielle I like the energy of this page. There are some really expressive exaggerated panels that help keep the page alive. I like panel 3 the best. You seemed to have put the most effort into that panel with the color rendering and flame background and it shows.

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In my latest update, it looks like things will be getting more complicated for Oops with the Chief of Knights and a Hec Hound hot on their trail. O.O

Also in vertical format here.