Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[SkipperWing]

Aw, thanks! I know I don't have to, but I like that you connect the panels by having elements of the next panel (Rei's hair, Max's speech bubbles) pop into the previous one. It gives the reader's eye an automatic place to go and leads them across the page. Also, I like that you play with speech bubbles and that they aren't all the same format in order to denote who's speaking and how (out loud vs. thoughts). Good job!

[quietsnooze]

@Jewe11s I am LOVING your lighting effects, holy crap! They must have taken forever to get right, and it works perfectly! And it helps flow through the pages really well. Great job! __ Now I have to go see how this links in to everything else!

Here's my latest page! Perfect for any Potterheads in here.

[infectedbloodcomics]

Really awesome art, fun and communicative facial expressions and great coloring! Awesome job!

In The Green-Eyed Sniper, we find out more about Sekhmet's past as a war criminal.

[atlas]

Interesting panel composition and I like that overhead shot in the first panel. You pull off the Eerie sci-fi look well!

My newest from SweetGum:

[60Six]

I was actually hoping to comment on one of your pages earlier in this thread but someone beat me to it! Your style is so cute and charming and the format of your comic is definitely recognizable. Just the fact that you go with something warmer like brown instead of black gives me a sorta cozy feel when I look at it. Maybe this sounds a little weird, but it makes me happy in the same way things like Animal Crossing do!

Here's the latest page of City of Blank!

[Benzy]

@Riko
I LOVE the coloring and over all look of your comic. Honestly it's what I'm trying to strive for in my own but failing at. And that food! The flow is really nice too, I'll have to subscribe and find out more.

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This is the latest page for Discount Religion. I'm experimenting with the line and color.

[atlas]

@Riko I thank you, Ma'am, for your wonderful comments on my little comic! How you describe your feelings as you read it reassures the motivations I had when I started that comic!

@Benzy It's not very often that I would describe grown men as large as that guy as "cute", but that's what he is! A gentle giant who knows what he's capable of, but is also SO polite about it. lol And excellent art as always!

My latest from Beasts of Ushin:

[60Six]

@Benzy Oh gosh, thank you so much! I actually like the lighting in your comic a lot though (And especially your drawing style)! But if you're using photoshop, I'd be happy to show you sort of my layers or something to give some ideas on how to go about your coloring!

[Benzy]

I use Clip Studio, but I could probably apply some Photoshop stuff to it. I would be THRILLED to see your layers and process though, so if you are willing I'd love to connect and talk about comics and art and such. Or you can make a comic thread, I'm sure a lot of people would like to see that kinda stuff since it's super helpful.

[Cielle]

@atlas I think you do a really good job capturing expressions on this page! Especially that fourth panel. He looks so smarmy! What a little punk. Your style reminds me of traditional manga, particularly Rumiko Takahashi (Ranma 1/2, Inuyasha, Urusei yatsura). Nicely done!

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Here's the latest page of Reus, wherein we get a sneak peek into Rei's arrival in Regaia.

[HeSerpenty]

That's a really nice establishing shot page! I am always intimidated by shots like this because detailed environments are NOT my strong suit-- so I am always super impressed when other people pull it off! I love all all the lights <33

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This week in Serpents..... more shenanigans, can Wex fix it, aaaaand just what WILL happen to Merek if Hizruk is really missing? D:

[Kecreed]

@HeSerpenty I enjoy the character designs as well as that mighty creature the soldiers are riding on. I must admit I was a tad confused on which to read first in the panel after "can you fix it?" I read the next panel on the right first and got confused in the panel with the grates though in the end I figured it out.

Here's another sheep related joke.

[mariusthered]

@Kecreed, I enjoyed the gag and the overall look of the page, the only advise i would say is maybe a little legs.

this is the new page of Tales from swipe city and to be honest i was glad to see the end of it, it was one of those fiddly pages, plot wise it's now starting to come together in the first season...

[atlas]

An intriguing page! I like how the dialogue turns from ordinary chit-chat, to how the cop's wife help set an alleged murderer free. It's like seeing something out of network television! The lineart fits the subject matter quite well, I must say.

Here's my newest page from Strike Pup:

[Alexandritea]

I really like your linework, and i really adore the style you're using.
you also have some very pretty ladies in these panels c:
the dialogue got me a bit interested of what was going on exactly.
so i checked it out c: it looks really interesting.

Here is the latest page of my comic In the Name of the Creator.

[Cielle]

@Alexandritea this is a really nice page! I really like the mood you create with the color scheme. The red and blue accents in the second panel are especially cool! I do have one suggestion: I think the text would be a little easier to read if the speech bubbles were a little bigger. The words themselves are very mysterious and intriguing though. Good job! ^.^

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Here is the latest page of Reus

[atlas]

Very interesting page layout, with captivating dialogue in the middle of such diverse settings! So much detail that has my eyes scanning the entire page!

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Here's the latest from my comic, SweetGum:

[agentfink]

I was really excited when I saw the above comic, having read it before in the forums
Great job as always! Love the format, the style... very storybook !

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Here's page 3 of The Pale

[mariusthered]

@agentfink I love the cleanness of the page, it has a very old comics feel ,like the ones I read as a kid, I my self have the pain of having to draw police uniforms so yer i can totally feel this page.

this is my newest page as far as art work goes, but it is also a revamp of my introduction page to make it look more appealing to new readers. ( and if you look closely I'm in my part as the mayor of swipe city) enjoy...

[atlas]

Hah, so much taking place for such a small incident! I like how there's SO much going on in this page. You don't see a city's history being portrayed in a comic very often. Interesting page.

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Here's the latest from my comic Strike Pup: