Salutations!

Haha as you might've guessed, I'm working on my fantasy novel, The Locks of Skaa'rev! Like a lot of you have recently, I joined the Tapas Writers Camp. I thought it would be a great way to make a story I wanted to tell happen, and find other stories to read and I was right. The Writers Camp has been a great lark and everyone I've met so far has been amazing.

I wanted to share my novel now that I had enough pages posted, I feel like readers could get a good chunk of my writing as an example at this point. I'd love to hear feedback, whatever catches you as you read. I haven't gone through a major editing phase with it yet, so I know there's a lot I'll likely need to fix, but knowing what and where is half the battle so feedback is invaluable. As a few of you might know, I tend to run around doling out writing advice myself so, hahah fair is fair, so many people have graciously accepted my feedback, and I'd love to hear any constructive criticism in turn.

I've also started posting character art on my profile page and within the body of the novel itself, as a thank you to my subs who have been very cordial with me and patient as I get my pages done. (Which, if any of you guys want to leave feedback here, the more the merrier, I'll be posting this link on my profile page.) Cheers everyone and I welcome your feedback! (And even if you don't have any feedback, you're still welcome to say hello or chat. :slight_smile: ) I'll even share some of that concept art from my dash here to get you started:

I will say that my novel's main cast are all adults, so they find themselves in adult situations. This includes violence or sexual situations and anything that'll fall under mature will be so marked. There are themes of romance including same sex relationships so I just wanted to be up front about that and again, if anything falls under mature it'll all be labeled.

Without further ado: