The prologue is done!

[faisalhussein394]

Well, I have finally finished the prologue and it's a long one. Feel free to read if you're interested in it.

And also having a critique about it would be nice. I am now working on Chapter 01 and would like to improve it by knowing the reviews of the prologue and prevent some flaws. The 1st chapter will be focusing on the main character Mukhtar, and I won't publish it until I at least reach 20-25 pages.

So, enjoy:

Mukhtar | Tapas

[CarltonIsaac]

A wondrous narration it was indeed and the visual journey was well worth the time. Thank you, and yes, we want more, more, more... when you return.

[SleepsorMaddi]

Congrats!! You're one step closer to having a full story!!! I can't wait.

[MeltingCORE]

Yes, congratz! I'm glad I've been following your work since I joined the site.