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Sketch for my comic using the Riley method, I drew the figure very loosely and fast to see if
it works. I think it did, I like the pose

Thank you! And good news about your grandpa! Cyborg Grandpas can be pretty tricky.
Loving your cover and wishing you all the best!


Upcoming comic character
My brother named him Jerry Finestine.
Actually my brother randomly said the name Jerry Finestine and I stole it.

I'm fretting about the negative space here (and yes yes I know "they are the same picture" meme - I promise you one side is just a liiiiiitle smaller...)

I'm leaning to the smaller one because the bigger one feels just a tad more overwhelming...? But there is more focus on the MC in the bigger one...

I personnally like the bigger one more, we feel more involved and closer to the scene emotionnally without making the bg less legible. Also "hope" is bigger too so that feels symbolic.

Baking some short comic specials :wink: (this is the first of five - God bless my hands lol)

Hey folks, I want to see if this is clear enough and this is a complete page. Does it look like a sandstorm being caught in a hand?

Please let me know.

After reading a bit more of How to Noir, I have done this little 3 page story, based on the chapter 1 of the novel The Masked Criminal1 by Ramen.
Does anyone here have a fav action novel that I could try to hit with the noirifying ray? It makes wonders as a practice!

Jesus I hadn't realized how long it'd been since I last posted here. Anyway, here are some Procreate sketches of Nigel being amoral

Recent patreon sketch reward of the cutie digimon Herissmon.

Yes I'm alive lol, just struggling to be at a pc with my hip pain issues currently, missed you all!

This wednesday's chapter illustration WIP! (Smoll spoiler~)

@Mallory I’m in team larger pic. More focus on the MC and that negative space in the smaller image is drawing more attention to the top football helmet (which is kind of dead space). The tighter shot in the larger image feels more streamlined and focused.

@simonitropunk ish. I can see the fingers but without clear shapes, it’s tough. Maybe a more overt illustration of a gripping hand and some sand escaping through the fingers (just a bit) might help. Either way, dialogue explaining what we’re seeing can add the right context.

She’s a bit hangry right now.