Aw shucks, a twisted fairytale, just right up my alley!
I noticed that you changed the size of the text in page 4. I think it's a little too small, maybe go back to the previous text size? Also, try to pay more attention to background details. Sure, it's not the main focus, but I think it'll look better if you keep colours inside the outlines, even for the backgrounds.
Not much to say right now, but this sure looks promising! Good luck with your comic