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I am rewriting and massively altering "The Unknown". My main novel. if anyone in here has read it, is there anything you'd like to see changed or added?

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Mostly pointing toward those points after episode 5 but will welcome any comments

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I love the energy but i was more so looking for current readers or subscribers. I wanted to get honest comments and opinions on characters and cultures as things. not so much about arcs and such. all that is gonna be changed heavily so its not all that important but if there are aspects that of those things that readers love and cant do without then id make an effort to keep those.

think of it more like spring cleaning and im asking if you still use somethinh before i throw it out.

i'd love for you to take a look after i rewrite it though!

So far, I've been told that the Machine Men should be expanded and The Fire Fae should be something else. Fae is too broad a term.

Great feedback so far! Anyone on here have more thoughts?

Here Lies Earth Episode 17 is Live! Check it out and subscribe! Please support my entry for the tapas Tourney! It's free to read! now that all 20 episodes are finished. im turning toward The Unknown rewrites.

A Scifi, Fantasy, Action Adventure Novel.

Cass is a freelance merc called a Multi. he takes a job to recover a "Spellbook". A digital prison for dangerous A.I.'s. After accidently releasing one, he is forced to track down and capture all of the A.I.'s remaining allies before they can wipe humanity out. Adventure, Powers, and Blood pumping action await!

I will be keeping the original series up but moving forward with the rewritten version!