I think it's definitely better! Though the perspective isn't quite lining up in a few places -- most notably, the crosswalk:
That's the main one, though there's a few places throughout where it feels like stuff isn't quite falling on the perspective grid. I also freehand when I draw environments (I usually set up a perspective grid and then just print it out and draw on top of it rather than using rulers) so I don't think that's bad to do. But if you're going to do that, watch out for things like what's happening over on the left -- those buildings feel kinda blobby, and they're not really attached to the ground or anything. You're going to want to sketch in that structure, even if you cover it up later. For example, there's a tree over on the far left of the image -- but if you follow the perspective grid of the sidewalk as it extends to the left side of the page, the tree isn't... quite where it should be.
stuff like this feels like small details, but I think it's a lack of underlying structure that will make an environment like this feel "sloppy" when things aren't quite in the right place. Go ahead and sketch in the sidewalk! Sketch in the bottoms of those buildings, even if they're going to be covered up! It's the same as drawing a person -- you have to understand and sketch out what the legs are doing, even if you're going to cover them up with a dress. You need that structure!
I think it's important also to pay attention to the details, and try not to fudge whenever you can. Not that you gotta Draw In Every Window On Every Building (you do not need to do that) -- instead, stuff like.... well, as an example, some of the buildings you've drawn butt right up against the street, which feels fake, since our brains know that curbs and sometimes sidewalks go there. there's a crosswalk that connects right to a building, which feels weird because a crosswalk should be at an intersection, not pointing at a building. Looking out for little things like that -- what do sidewalks actually look like? What does the ground floor of a tall city building actually look like? It's probably not just a flat block with a rectangle for a door. Where do stoplights and signs go? -- makes a HUGE difference. If you're not immediately sure what this stuff looks like, look up examples, even just a quick google image search, rather than just fudging it, because it's REMARKABLE how many things we look at every day without our brains storing enough information to reproduce them... and yet we'll know immediately if it's not right.
