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Jul 2023

Hi! I’m trying to design a mermaid based off Chinese carp fishes. Is there any way I can improve this character sketch or make it fits more into comic aesthetics? I would love to see what is your opinion, or you guys can draw over my original manga panel. Thank you! 🥰🥰🥰

I'd suggest either looking for/making a brush for the scales on the tail or simplifying it - it does look like something that would be a pain to redraw over and over again

I agree with simplifying the design. Also, the tail looks a bit rounder than it should be to me. I would recommend making the merperson's body more streamlined since they would have an easier time swimming that way

I like the koi fish influence with the rounder mermaid tail. Some other koifish mermaid Ive seen are just normal skinny-tailed mermaids with koifish color, which is boringgg

Simplifying the design, but that’s been said. This one is just an opinion but the tail looks a bit short compared to the torso?

Yeah it’s hard to make her look like a koi fish. Idk if you could draw over it’s fine to showed what you meant. 🫶

Here are the pointers I had in mind as I drew:

  • It could be cool to have the spots bleed upto the torso instead of having a clear line

  • No need to draw all the individual scales. Just the colorful spots are enough imo

  • The tail should look sleek but curvy

  • The fins should feel more like curtains or the hem of a dress: flowy instead of sharp

Also, the fins are too small in my drawing, it should be bigger

Edit: This made me want to draw a mermaid. Would you mind if I drew one, too?

  • Floating hair strands

  • Thinner than normal torso

  • Scales all around

  • Fins where the arms are to add onto the speed

  • Curtain-like tailfin

...I tried :blusht:

if they want to make it look less "stubby" they could also add a long wispy tail I think

That's a good idea. This is what I meant by curtain-like tail by the way :joy: Looks beautiful :sparkles:

The problem is that my koi fish girl doesn’t translate well and she just looked like a western mermaid lamoooooooo :sob::sob: