Translation help wanted. (English to spanish)

[FancyDreamer]

Hello, one of my characters is a bilingual character, and I wanted to show that in the story. I speak some Spanish, but I am by no means fluent. I just wanted some people to check over it and make sure I translated correctly.

I will structure it like this:

How I translated it
What I wanted to say

Mi hijo, no puedo creo cómo maduro tienes conseguido.
Son, I cannot believe how grown you have become.

Mamá, todavía estoy su bebé. ¡No estoy maduro!
Mama, I am still your baby boy. I am not grown!

Va a ser solitario sin ti.
It is going to be lonely without you.

Llamaré menudo.
I will call often.

Conduzca con seguridad.
Drive safely.

Audios, Mamá. Te quiero.
By mama, I love you.

[alez201]

Hi! Your translations should go like this. If you need more spanish translations, let me know.

• Hijo, no puedo creer cuan adulto te has vuelto.
  Son, I cannot believe how grown you have become.

• Mamá, todavía soy tu bebé. No soy adulto!
  Mama, I am still your baby boy. I am not grown!

• Va a estar solitario sin ti.
  It is going to be lonely without you.

• Llamaré a menudo.
  I will call often.

• Conduce con cuidado.
  Drive safely.

• Adios, Mamá. Te amo.
  By mama, I love you.

[fleurravenbooks]

Wait, are you putting it in the same bubble? If it's comic you should put original 1st, and then put " * " maybe with translation, if it's novel you can either put in at the bottom of chapter ( footnote) or put original line and then translation in brackets.

[FancyDreamer]

Its novel and I'm going to put translations in author's notes.

[FancyDreamer]

Thank you for the help. But I thought te amo was only used for significant others and te quiero for parents.

[YS_og]

I may be wrong but I am sure te amo includes familial love. te quiero would be more for a lover as it's in a sense "I want you"

[fleurravenbooks]

oh okay that is smart as well, i just thought that you would post it on other sites as well or self publish it (i post on wattpad and they don't have separate box for notes like tapas does)