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Jul 2024

Hello I am currently at 3 subs and 4 like and my milestone is at least to 10 or 20 and my likes 14 or 30

I have a webcomic
It is called Geisterhaft. It takes place in 1845 Germany and is about a young girl (trans girl Matts, Mathew Hans Dietrich) who wakes up one day to find everybody ignoring her, even her best friend/butler(Roman Klein). As she goes through the halls of her home there is this darkness following her and the overwhelming fear of something not right with her home or her body. Which she must find out what is going on with everyone and why she is having such strange hallucinations of death.


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    Jul '24
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Hi! To start with, I really like the cover you posted here!

I think where I see a problem is in pacing and readability. Seems like it's a little better in the most recent pages, but the first several, the panels are all the same-ish size and feel small and smushed together. Most people read on phones these days, so important to consider how things are fitting onto a small screen. I think putting more thought into formatting the panels, and slowing down the pace a bit would help. Pg 6 is the best constructed one, so I think if your future pages are closer to that in quality, you'll see more growth!

I skimmed more than read, but it seems like an interesting concept, just really rushed in the early pages.

Good luck!

Additional advice on growing subs!

Put a link to your comic in your forum profile. If you take the time to engage in conversation on the forums (not just the promo threads), you will sometimes naturally get people who are curious and will check your profile for said link. They will go look, and if they like, you can gain very genuine subs this way! It doesn't gain one tons of subscribers, but I like that it comes from a place of people being genuinely interested. <3

I think you could also do a little promo art, similar to what you have in your cover. Show off your art style a little when you have time to put effort into a single important image, verses a comic which tends to be simplified for speed. I think that way your art will help attract new people.

thank you for the advise.
I'm still learning how to better my comic and I want to make it better as I go on.
I really like your take on the pacing, I'll try to keep that in mind next time.