Hi! To start with, I really like the cover you posted here!
I think where I see a problem is in pacing and readability. Seems like it's a little better in the most recent pages, but the first several, the panels are all the same-ish size and feel small and smushed together. Most people read on phones these days, so important to consider how things are fitting onto a small screen. I think putting more thought into formatting the panels, and slowing down the pace a bit would help. Pg 6 is the best constructed one, so I think if your future pages are closer to that in quality, you'll see more growth!
I skimmed more than read, but it seems like an interesting concept, just really rushed in the early pages.
Good luck!