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Jul 2017

More specifically ones that have a story background of being a clone.
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Izuki has a special place in my heart for being pretty much my first and only fan character that I've ever made. She started out as my first try at drawing Izuna from "Izuna: the Unemployed Ninja" and very quickly I drew a more accurate version of Izuna. A short version of her story background is that she is a failed clone experiment who wishes to protect Izuna from her creator.

I want to use her though in the future for an original story and I want to know if I can use her as she is now or do I have to do signifigant changes. I want to keep the way she is now as a sort of reference to her origin.

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My personal view is that if your character looks like a clone (even if its not identical), then they're probably too close to the original. It's fine to take inspiration from other original works, but you need to make it your own. Think about giving Izuki more of her own silhouette and a unique outfit. Your original work deserves its own identity.

Once Izuki stands on her own as a character, you could always draw her dressed as Izuna for a fun call back to her origin as a fan character.

I think she definitely looks different enough, though if you changed the colour of her clothes it just might make it a little less easy to guess who she was based off of (imo)?

I've run into the same issue where I've made a fan comic/story, but I end up changing many of the characters so much they basically become completely different characters than the original (especially since I tend to write fan characters out of character to fulfill personal preferences). I feel safe to use those characters, even if I admit where they originated from. I just have to be sure they are indeed a different character and not a basic rip-off of the original. So, if you were to break down your character into 10 parts (as in costume, backstory, personality traits, quirks, genre, storyline, etc.), 2-4 parts can be the same as the character you are pulling inspiration from, and the remainder should be something fresh. Or something like that. I'm sure there's not a perfect formula.

In your case, it's even easier since you really just wrote a new character within a fan-story, not just a new version of an existing character (even though she's a clone, she's still her own person). Just try to avoid anything that speaks too closely to Izuna's story (I'm not familiar with it). For example, the creators of Rick and Morty admitted they based their premise off Back to the Future, but for that reason they will never explore time travel with Rick and Morty as they feel that is just too similar to the original.

As you go on with the story, you may find you are making (are have already made) significant changes to her naturally. Characters tend to take on a life of their own, as I'm sure you know. Fully embrace and amplify her differences :slight_smile: Also, even though you are probably comfortable drawing her a certain way, give her a bunch of different makeovers and switch up her personality in different and unexpected ways. It may seem blasphemous at first and hurt your heart to change your character so much, but just remember it is temporary. You are just playing around, none of the changes have to stick. But the amazing thing is you may find that one of your experiments you may be really into, and you may end up changing your character permanently after all!

Maybe change the clothing, hair color? It still looks very similar to the original. It's okay to take inspiration from something but directly basing it off of it is a little iffy.

My comic Welcome Back4 was based off dreams and I'm sure several characters were probably based off fictional and real life people whether I recognized them or not. I just changed them enough to stand out on their own, both personality and look wise.