Two year improvement!

[UnTalAugustus]

After finishing this last pages, I wanted to make a comparison between my first and last (for now) action scene I've drawn!
To make it more notable I'm comparing it with the VERY FIRST version of Chapter 1, colorless and before the redrawn.

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Drawing the same comic for some time really helps you improve, huh?
If you also have a two year comparison of your comic, or even longer, feel free to show it too!

[Lensing]

Well done and thanks for showing us.
That´s a good example of improvement

[ryoko]

Wow! You can really see the effort you've been making to improve for these past couple of years! The new pages are excellent, very nice flow and the action dynamics are fantastic! I love how you're using a very unique colour palette to make your characters really jump off the page. Great work!

[UnTalAugustus]

Thank you very much!! @Lensing and @ryoko

The action was definitely the thing I wanted to improve at the most.

[Number15]

@UnTalAugustus I love seeing improvement like this, it's so good!

I'll share one of mine from when I was first coming up with my comic vs now

[UnTalAugustus]

That's great @Number15 !!
I was thinking no one would take my invitation to show their improvement, haha! I really like the colors and shading of your most recent illustration