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Aug 2015

try it!
im quite curious about what can u write about it lol
here s it:

Well right off the bat I can tell that this is a story about wireheads, specifically the one with the DS-909. I'd assume this basically means theres a "chrome" in their brain that acts to enhance it, or is a replacement of the brain itself, and also can expand to things such as body parts like the neck and eyes.
Then there's "basics" who I can pretty confidently say are just people who don't have or refuse to have a chrome implanted. There will probably be one that has some importance in the story. Possibly a love interest for the before mentioned 909 guy.
I guess due to the run down look that wires are basically a status symbol to some people (you're pretty much "not cool" without one).
ok I guess I'm just describing the page at this point... I'll focus on the story after this
I'm just going to say its something like iRobot and the ugrade is a really really bad idea....
yeh, that's all I got...

Hey, good guess!: D You even made it cooler than it actually is. You're right about "basics", those are regular people. "Chrome"'s just a slang word for implants, but yeah, you pretty much got that down. In their world enhancing yourself with cybernetics is looked down at (and sometimes flat out illegal), except, of course, for this club of edgy rebels where body bodification is the coolest thing ever.
> the ugrade is a really really bad idea....
....while not immediately relevant to anything on this page, you kind of still got it right, as it will be a future plot point. omg 8D
That was fun! Thanks for doing this!

I forgot to ask in the guess could you give a link to your series? I kinda want to read more of this smile