Hey guys, I was hoping to get Chapter 1 of my my comic printed so I wanted to update all the pages from chapter 1 with my new text and word bubbles. In the past I used Clip Studio Paints default text and word bubbles. There were okay, but the style didn't look nice on my art and the flow was kinda off. I also changed a bit of the dialogue, but it's nothing to major to story details and makes it flow better. I wanted to know what you guys thought of the improvements. Mind you that the new bubbles and text is what I'm currently using now. I made chapter 1 pages around half a year ago.
New Page
Old Page
I hope you guys like the changes and for anyone interested in my comic. Here's a link to it. I have it on webtoons too.
