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tiredpigeon 2021-02-04 16:08:04 UTC #1

Here's mine-... He hasn't been introduced yet, but he's lovely.

"Hand me the modern torture device-.. stiletto nails and an iPhone."
"Oh, dear. Blood on the floor again. Bones, too. Lots and lots of lovely bones."

lunagraves714 2021-02-04 16:22:22 UTC #2

Oh I love this idea!

“The living protects the dead only to succeed in joining their ranks.” Offering up his thin, skeletal hand, he sneered down at me with crooked, yellow teeth and breath that reeked of rotten fish. His eyes appeared almost completely black, cold amusement glinting in their corners.

alexlcuri07 2021-02-04 16:28:47 UTC #3

Ooo, I love a chance to highlight a big baddie~

“What did I do?” Another pause. A moment in time where the man said nothing, and the darkness of the space seemed to fall in on the brunet like a cascade. The next few words grazed across his skin like acid. “I pushed her.”

All_and_None 2021-02-04 16:45:37 UTC #4

sxxaint 2021-02-04 17:12:30 UTC #5

Oh, this is great! My villain's actually going to make an appearance soon. Although honestly he's more of an actions guy.

“What’s the matter, Cassie?” Levi cooed. His hand spread open-palmed on the back of Casper’s skull, and Levi forced Casper’s head down inch by inimical inch. “I can feel hunger in your skin, darling. It’s a parasite between your bones. Don’t you dare lie to me, Cassie. If there’s one thing I hate it’s when people lie to me.”

julipow 2021-02-04 17:24:24 UTC #6

Oh! I love this! Time for my antagonist to shine!

“Why should I stop? This is the reality. It’s over… You lost everyone. There is nothing left for you to be strong for.”

“Give up, Sera. Join me and let us be together for eternity like it was meant to be in the beginning.”

‘The loss of this knight is the least I have to worry about. Oh, the risks you have to take to win are rather exciting.’

These are some rather mild examples. His true sick doings will be revealed over time, Azrael is quite an intense boy with...interesting tastes.

SkittishMoon 2021-02-04 17:38:48 UTC #7

Tossing my hat in the ring! My Antagonist is a bit bloodthirsty...

" Omitted: It didn’t have to be this way, Darlington...You were helping a noble cause. The health and wellness of Hokkaido was dependent on the sacrifice of those purples...they were gonna die anyway...and at least they had a use then-"

DasIstWunderblyat 2021-02-04 22:06:01 UTC #8

I only have "villain"

“I defeated, yes,” that man closed in a strangely disappointed tone. He closed his eyes. "May you learn from this fool decision, or you end up like me."

(His speech is characterized by weird or broken English. It is more believable if he doesn't speak English at all)

HopefulAttempt 2021-02-04 23:16:44 UTC #9

The first "villain" to really make an appearance in the story is really only a villain to the main characters, and kind of a hero to everyone else.

“Why would they?” Armel scoffed, “I haven’t killed anyone.”

ivanskilling 2021-02-05 01:47:30 UTC #10

Ooh I love this idea! Villains are the best.

(Aren't stalkers the creepiest?)

A comment from someone called “thesandrabod” sent chills down his spine. It read:

Sandra belongs to me and only me. You will pay for posting this video.

(I really enjoyed writing Pan Ke to be honest. )

“Empress,” Pan Ke addressed her with amusement in his voice. “There’s no need to burden yourself with a weapon. I shall personally ensure that your life ends quickly and without pain.”

(And finally, this is from my short story Pay The Ransom)

It’s cute that you think you can escape my eyes. I would hate to see you disappear, even though you’re a pathetic loser.

https://tapas.io/episode/1973047

aarujarv 2021-02-05 20:53:44 UTC #11

This is a teaser from a yet unpublished chapter.

"It is not hard to understand your point of view." Lord Sool growled. "We took your lands, you live for a damn near eternity. But a noble cause? No. My cause is not noble, nor is it meant as a chance for the kingdoms of Tavran to get revenge for injustices done. I am a very unhappy person, planning the murder of an entire family bloodline. I see on the throne of men a bloodline so old and complacent, it has no strength left to rule. I am a stronger alternative."

sarahmassey998 2021-02-06 00:48:33 UTC #12

“You are experiments! Failures in a search for perfection. What can you know of my design? Your only purpose is to further my science. Death is your only birthright!”

Kinda non-spoiler for later chapter.

HippieGhost 2021-02-06 00:55:50 UTC #13

Less a "villain" and more of a minor antagonist. Ashleigh has a very fitting name.

“I think he doesn’t realize how miserable he is,” she huffed, “he should be outside, basking in the light, going to church and... you know...” she waved her hand a bit, “being a man, not just some boy.”

carafox2121 2021-02-06 03:54:22 UTC #14

Soren, I suppose, is the villain, but it's a little more complicated than that.

“And how exactly are we supposed to stop it? Who’s to say that leaving the girl be isn’t the right move either? What if she doesn’t know what she is?”

Soren’s smile was dark, but sorrowful. “Do not worry, brother. I will take care of all of it once I’ve captured the girl. Despite her abilities, she is mortal.” He paused, seemingly lost in thought. Finally, Soren said, “Trust in me.”

Chaos is a total villain! But she's weirdly fun to write.

“Ah, yes, Miasma. A disappointing little pet, but effective, wouldn’t you say? He certainly caught your attention which was, after all, my intention. But come on, my little superhero. I need you to dig deeper now.” Her shadow circled me faster than I could keep up. “Can’t you feel it?”

“Feel?” I whispered, confused.

“That’s right. I know you can.” She paused and the whole room felt suddenly wicked. “After all, you couldn’t be you… without me.”

JoshRaid 2021-03-16 22:55:52 UTC #15

"You're so forward, you should at least take me to dinner first"

thedude3445 2021-03-18 05:04:18 UTC #17

"I'm gonna beat you up, and then I'm gonna have you arrested for assault. I can do that, you know. Buddy's Honda Emporium has friends in high places."

TheOddFungi 2021-03-18 05:13:00 UTC #18

Ooooh, this is a great idea! My villains haven't made an appearance yet and I had trouble deciding which line to use. I have so many good ones D:

“It’s hilarious! None of you know a damn thing about what’s really going on here!” he shouts, looking around. “You took this boy in without even knowing what he really is! Let me show you what you have been hiding in your quaint little home!”

ariffazaad 2021-03-18 09:54:02 UTC #19

RAGGRIK: ... you hungry, boyyy? (smiles devilishly) ... cause I am.