It seems really nice so and polished so far! My only two cents is that because I can't really tell the difference between the blonde women maybe they could have a different haircut or hairstyle or something? Like I'm assuming there's probably a reason that they're clones since they have the same mole but for now it's somewhat confusing since most anime style has very similar faces anyway so it took me until the title to realize "oh they're supposed to be the same".
The other thing is that the font and bubbles feel busy and a little over-designed. The outline on the white font as well as the colored bubbles that are kind of see through and different shades of orange and also have an outline and a drop shadow, it isn't doing it for me. I personally don't think they need that many design elements, and it's starting to feel like a sports font situation. That and the line "We'll just have to pick a different day then" tangents with the edge of the frame, and I'd like it to overlap or not lap at all.
But I think it's interesting and it'll be cool to see where it goes!