I am currently working on a comic called "Tin." I'm only three pages in, but it's never too early to look for some feedback, so what do you guys think?
https://tapastic.com/episode/536618
So far, I'm really enjoying the art and the pale colors. On the other hand, there isn't a lot to critique. I'm willing to see where this comic goes though.
looks nice! The limited pallet is nice and makes the colors matter more. I think the gestures are also very good. At the moment I'm a little confused as to where the story is going but it's only three pages so its hard to tell at the moment! I'm excited to see more!
Love the expression in the characters movement so far, can't wait to see what he gets up to.
Hi there. There's a few more pages added since the last time I posted and I was wondering if I could get some feedback.
Seems fun. I like the scribbly kinda look going on. I like the framing of the faces/reactions.I feel like the Monster thing was leading to some sort of joke...like he was going to speak english and be like "Ouch. Damn dude. I'm just chillin" ha
Also the name is used for another comic I found on kickstarter awhile ago. https://www.facebook.com/TinComics/?fref=ts
Just FYI....
Huh. I had no idea about that. Should I change it?
Kind of reminds me of the art style of something like Bone, it's quite charming.
I don't think you have to. I don't think the other Tin comic is terribly established and I'm doubting they have a copyright. Up to you probably.
Okay., thank you. I don't think I'll change it.
