Ya sure. Here goes.
Af first I’m surprised that you don’t have more subs than you have. I see this comic as a brilliant one that could be premium. But then again I’m afraid that Adult Swim humor isn’t the main thing here at Tapas.
I see the story, plot, and humor in good balance and you joggle it all very well. I love the way you have the God, Jesus and Devil thing going without me being offended.
The plot is very foreseen but that's okay because the journey is great.
From time to time you drag the dialog and jokes a little like when he runs after the cat too long. Or when Mr. Knight have insurance problems
The art I’m no personal fan of. Either was I that of Rick and Morty but I have seen all seasons twice.
And so I see it with your comic. It is the character, jokes, and story I love.
I have no Idea of how to improve the art. I can only make squares that I copy and call it a comic.
I love that you are here and tribute to the community with other than BL Manga (Nothing wrong with that, but we need other things too)
Keep up the good work and make life awesome.
Here is my comic: