What do you think of my first novel? feedback?

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-03 19:43:25 UTC #1

that's my novel

Phoenix_fly 2025-04-03 19:52:09 UTC #2

The way you started the novel with telling about queen is good. And after you added the emotion, that was felt real for a sec.

Read mine one
Void Space

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-03 19:54:28 UTC #3

"Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you liked the introduction and the emotions in the story. I’ll check out your novel too!"

DURG143 2025-04-04 10:47:13 UTC #4

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-04 17:04:39 UTC #5

new chapter!??
What do you think about it

DURG143 2025-04-04 17:15:10 UTC #6

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Phoenix_fly 2025-04-04 17:17:07 UTC #7

To whom are you saying?

DURG143 2025-04-04 17:23:07 UTC #8

It was a god start and I loved the narration how the characters are designed and it is a wonderful writing
Finally waiting for more
my novel is in the last post I hope you enjoy it....
anyway here's the link https://tapas.io/series/THE-HORIZON/info

DURG143 2025-04-04 17:27:15 UTC #9

I read the first chapter It was a good start and good narration.
I like reincarnation genre and looking forward to your story.

DURG143 2025-04-04 17:30:11 UTC #10

What do you think about mine...

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-04 17:31:26 UTC #11

"Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you liked the start of the story and enjoyed the character design. I really appreciate your comments, they gave me a lot of energy. I'm looking forward to more of your thoughts, and I hope you enjoy the continuation of the story as well

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-04 17:33:05 UTC #12

"I'm following your novel and supporting it! However, I have to admit that I'm not really into the romantic genre, and I don't know much about love and romance

DURG143 2025-04-04 17:36:16 UTC #13

Thank you for supporting my novel even though romance isn’t your thing—it means the world! I’d love to hear your thoughts on the characters or plot anytime—your perspective keeps the story fresh!

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-05 11:27:13 UTC #14

Hi guys.

New chapter!?
What do you think about it??

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-06 08:37:11 UTC #15

what do you thinking about new chapter?

amirhosseinbahr 2025-04-07 07:16:31 UTC #16

new chapter is coming

DURG143 2025-04-08 14:35:19 UTC #17

I have read the last chapter and it was interesting good work keep it up...
here's mine..