What was the first thing your character said?

[harlan]

"About damned time."

"Yeah, this is Arq," I answer abruptly, reaching for my cutting sword. "What's your business?"
Elf Noir

[ivanskilling]

Thanks for the opportunity! This is fun!

“We need a new thrust.”
~ Nick Rich from Romance Uncliched!

“What happened? Is it a bank robbery? Street mugging?? Murder???”
~ Thomas from Devil's Triangle

“There’s no way you can help me vanish tonight?”
~ Sandra from Dark Bytes

“Why, it’s my honor to finally meet the well-known General Wangchuk. One would think that such a fine general would be gentleman enough to provide a comfortable setting for a lady.”
~ Empress Dowager Wu from Shackles

“How much longer will this take?”
~ Valerie from Reversing Mr. Right

[WildMoonCrow]

“Where’s my book?” -Ellie from The Vampire Skull - Echoes of the Void

“Woah there kid! Don’t just go touching everywhere, it’s kinda rude.” -Skully from The Vampire Skull - Echoes of the Void

[DasIstWunderblyat]

“I wish for an end—I miss my home.”

[C.L.G]

"Treehouses are for little kids."

-Ellis Ranger from Desio Jokoa

[XiuLyn_12]

Oof, I don't think the first thing my characters' say will be unique or even amusing, but here we go!

"Alina, I think we should stop seeing each other"
- Jaden from Coping with Heartbreak (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"What?"
- Alina from Coping with Heartbreak (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"Excuse me. Are you alright? Would you like to get a taxi home?"
- Noah from Coping with Heartbreak (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"Noah? Why are you still on the counter? It's past your shift, though"
- Silas from Coping with Heartbreak (A Bunch of Love Stories)

" Let's leave. People have already taken pictures".
- Aubrey from Loose Knot (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"Seriously, dude? Another public breakup with another random chick?"
- Shane from Loose Knot (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"Sure, why not? Come sit with us!"
- Gillian from Bitter Taste (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"No, Gillian- Didn't you see him leaving a bunch of guys just now?"
- Delia from Bitter Taste (A Bunch of Love Stories)

"Welcome home, loser"
- Brandon and Landon from Bitter Taste (A Bunch of Love Stories)

Okay, I have more characters than I thought, lol!

[marnieed92]

"Welcome Su Yi to the space between mirrors." ~ Jun from The Ivory Mirror

"It's almost time... just a bit longer and she'll wake up." ~ Kael from Eternal Rose

"Hello, welcome to The Reading Nook." ~ Faye from Playable Character

"I'm fine," ~ Jae from Never The Same

"How many people are taking part this time?" ~ Adrienne from Beyond The Camera

"I'm sorry, Chae!" ~ Yeosang from When We First Met

"Well, it doesn't appear like she's breathing. Plus, if you look at her neck, there are two puncture marks there." ~ Donghun from Bound To Immortality

[Takaki03]

Edith: "What am I doing here. Such a waste of time..."
Cadence: "Miss Carelle, could you please arrange my performance to the last please?"
Cavina: "Finally, failed the final performance spectacularly. How was yours?"
Steifan: "...thanks."

Why are all the first dialogues sound so innocent lol.

[NellieVP318]

I only posting the MC's first in two of my novels:

"Yo, Raphael. Sorry, I'm late," The young woman apologized to the visiting man.- Leticia, The Melodies of Secrets.

When the former guitarist asked, “Why not?” - Leticia, Closing Act of True Colors

Both times, I never mentioned her name at her first appearances.

[sgalm1]

"I'm tired", he responds.

• Noah Davies, from There Is Nothing Wrong With The Children. (mood, tbh )

"What are you hiding?", he asks.

• Rune Choi, from There Is Nothing Wrong With The Children

[R.n.P]

Of course, I'd love to

Luca Vincenco from THE ROLLING STONE
He kept it short and simple XD

[powerplantanimations]

"My name is Naota Nakaoka and I had it all..."
~ Naota Nakaoka from That Stick Figure Isekai

[stiatent]

In I'm Not A Sick Boy 1'st thing the two brother mcs said

Owen Moriarty: I'm not getting the sight

Evan Moriarty: No Bud! By your finger

[faisalhussein394]

Mukhtar climbing a mountain.
MUKHTAR: ""Take the chore of a shepard" they said."

Mukhtar slipped and nearly fell off, he looked down.
MUKHTAR: ""It will be easy" they say."

Mukhtar continues climbing.
MUKHTAR: "The things I do for Om'atie's (Mother) sake."

[Lensing]

Johnny Atomic first ever sentence was:
"A good day/morning to go fishing!"

[writerhongpao]

"Aegukga"

~ Ha-neul, from My Second Life

[MarcelotheProducer]

"Yes, sir, it has sustained damages however."

• The Crusader, from Crusader of the Mind

[allenT]

"Is it now the time?... Should be coming out at any moment-"

(should've voice it more natural)

[CarltonIsaac]

"You think... therefore... I am."
- the first thing every character I created said to me.

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