What's the appeal?

[MadamBubble]

I've been wanting people to give my long awaited series a proper review, people have already fallen in love with the series before the main story has even began. Does it have any entertainment value or are they just in it for the visuals? This is a two person project after all, which wasn't my original intention, it was gonna be drawn with pen and paper though after working on it for 8 months the older pages really didn't age well so I had to get @ananyabellary to assist me.

Then the first page came out and it did fairly decent, it wasn't until page 2 when my expectations were blown away, a few days prior I had submitted to Tapas Memes.

Link: https://tapas.io/episode/1161961

A few hours after it was featured, I hit 19 subs, and they keep coming. All because of a meme! Which is tantamount to being famous!

Though back to the discussion, give me an honest critique about this series, and what could make it even better in the long run.

Personal Bubble | Tapas

[DeformedSunflower]

Regarding the story:
I like the concept of a main character who is obsessed with bubble baths. I think a lot of us understands just how comfortable relaxing in a bath full of foamy, soapy, warm water is. In addition to that, Josephine has another aspect that people can relate to-- she struggles to become an 'adult'. She's in a dilemma between either fulfilling her dreams or satisfying the societal standards, which I'm pretty sure isn't an uncommon thing either.

Regarding the art:
I see a lot of inconsistencies. Some lines are waaay thicker than the others, and sometimes straight lines are wonky while the others are very neat. I'm not sure if it's because you activated the pressure sensitivity, but I keep the size of my brush consistent.

But congrats for the sub-count! Best wishes to you.

[MadamBubble]

Holy shit that's deep, this is the kind of feedback that will help me greatly in the long run.