Who wants me to check out their comic?

[DiegoPalacios]

Hi ndtony1. Welcome to Tapas!, Here is my comic.
Is a comedy about the epic journey of a rock saving the world from the forces of evil.....Yes is an actual inanimate rock

rocky the rock :: Cover | Tapas

[NDmangaka]

Welcome to Tapastic since ur new. Thanks for the feed back I started my comic a while ago so as I release more episdoes u'll see the art work gradually improve. I love ur idea for ur comic. I like the creative characters. My feedback would be to spend more time drawing the panels quality overy quantity. Don't recycle drawings and try different poses. Keep up the good work and u'll successful.

[NDmangaka]

Hey thanks for checking out my comic. I just saw urs. I like it.. it's pretty funny. My feedback would be to maybe try using digital coloring. I use ibis paint x it's free on google play and itunes. Also try to personify the rock a little more. A few humanoid features maybe. Keep up the good work and keep working hard.

[beta1042]

Haha I am definitely guilty of this. I will keep it in mind. Thanks for the feedback.

I also hope that the longer I do this and with every episode things improve. I guess that's why I'm making the comic in the first place.

[NDmangaka]

Yeah with time things will improve good luck

[DiegoPalacios]

Thanks!. At first i thought abut adding a face to Rocky, but then i saw some potential jokes with his lack of a face, and it made it more absurd when characters talk to a faceless rock. I added the headband for the personalization, but i see the potential of personalizing Rocky`s appearance further in a future part of the story.
About paint x, ¿is easy to use?

[NDmangaka]

yes very. if u ever need any help let me know. good luck

[NDmangaka]

yes very. if u ever need any help let me know. good luck

yes very. if u ever need any help let me know. good luck

[gwizdala]

Take a look at my two! Would love to hear any feedback you have.

The Simple Things | Tapas

Whiteboard Reviews | Tapas

[YangKoete]

Yeah, I plan on adding colour or something. It's more of a "slice of life" style than anything though.

[NDmangaka]

love your art work. It's very good, i really like he detail you put into it. the simple things is very relatable. My only criticism would be maybe to make he episode a little longer. Besides that it's all good. Keep up the hard work and great art.

[gwizdala]

Thanks so much! Do you have any thoughts on Whiteboard Reviews?

[crocuta]

ghenny, your comic is very good. Please make more.

[KimaAndJeorge]

Thank You. I'm going to make a better cover in the future. That one was rushed and barely any effort.

[ghenny]

Thank you! I will make sure to post new updates soon...

[ghenny]

Thank you very much, I plan to work on new chapters soon.

[genjiOtori]

I saw you want some critique so I thought I give you a bit of advices.

I really like your art style - it's kinda manga-stylized and I really enjoy that. Your story seems to be one of those epic, action, drama-like stories and it's quite interesting.I wonder, is it a short story or something longer?

To start, I'd recommend putting some efforts into perspective (vanishing points). It's sometimes a bit hard to see where, what and how things happens. Another important point is your paneling. Read some theory how to guide the readers view through each page to make it easier to understand. I like that you have the basics (e.g. where to put speech bubbles) already but sometimes your paneling suggest a different flow than it actually is.
Those two points are mostly researching and theory so I think it could be fun to read a bit about that topic ^^v

[NDmangaka]

Ok thanks for the feed back. Perspective has always been hard for me but I'll work hard to correct it. Your also correct in saying i could se some help in paneling. Any youtube links or articles could help if u have time. Thanks again and have a good day.

[genjiOtori]

Oh, I don't know any english online resources for that, because I mostly learned from books.
If you have a few dollars left, I highly recommend Scott McCloud's book "Making Comics". It has everything needed for a manga/comic (all the basics from anatomy, emotions, paneling to perspective and publishing - but only basics!).

[NDmangaka]

Oh ok I'll check it out thank you