Hi I wouldn't mind a second set of eyes to go through my comic, I know there are some grammatical issues but I am having a hard time spotting them. if anyone would be willing to give me a hand that would be much appreciated!
would this be a long term thing or just for the pages that’ve already been uploaded?
Preferably long term but just for what there is isn't bad
ok, so I definitely won't have time to take on a project like this long term so I'm sorry. but I went ahead and made some edits and suggestions to the pages with text errors in red.
(note that crossed out words are words I think should be taken out, replaced or corrected. boxes mean that I think a speech bubble should not be shown as dialogue and instead a narration box, and the circles by some speech bubbles are ones that I think should instead be thought bubbles.)
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Cheers I appreciate it a lot man
i would gladly do it
