I'm planning to release the first chapter of my comic soon, and wanted some feedback before I do. Here I have my logo and social media promo art, which I'm hoping to improve where I can!
I also am trying to see what to put as a story description that is attention grabbing as possible. I have a few written, and maybe y'all can tell me which one would make you want to read it! Read them here:
I think the logo is very nice actually! It's clean and legible! The only critique I have for it is I think it'd be more balanced for the blue lines that go into the field of yellow on the W to better match the ones in the Es.
As for the description, I like 1 the best.
I'd suggest you add a 3d color into your logo like this oeach pink as suggested by color scheme designer to compliment you blue tone. Its nice for that kanjy letters or your name, or at least make it other tone - dark or lighter blue - as you can see the logo lacks contrast. All though I like the anime vibe! personally I prefer more warm yellow like suggested - this one is cooler lemon like and cool Or if you prefer this lemon shade try moving blue a bit more warm. It's always good to maintain warm-cool and lght-dark balance in your pictures. especially logo should be most striking and catchy =)
Thanks for pointing that out! It seems like everyone likes the first one so I'll go with that haha
Thanks a lot for the suggestions! Especially with the grey and color comparison; I hadn't thought of looking at it that way!
Logo: Stunning and so inviting!
And definitely numero uno is perfect for your story description. It's funny, appealing, and downright creative. Great job.
