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The reason I didn't reveal what X is is that it completely changes the way at which the audience views the story, meaning I should probably reveal it two chapters in; the speculation has been quite eye revealing as to what I should change. I thought about saying what X is; but I think I know enough …
So, the notes I've gathered so far: Disclaimers and Nonprofit, while they can help to dissuade legal issues, have no bearing on whether or not a fanmade story can be taken down or not. Transformative fanfiction is within the safe zone, mostly (more on that) if only because it's not using the source …
I've figured out what I'm going to be doing, or at least my options. 1. Retelling the Dot Hack series in it's entirety 2. Retelling most of the Dot Hack series 3. An informational but sped up telling of the Dot Hack series (i.e. generalizations/Thing -> Thing -> Catastrophic thing -> Thing) The fi…
Hm... Okay, so basically, this is all supposed to be based off of the real deal- Read more here > Coldbird Forums To be perfectly honest, I have no idea what to do for making a webcomic for Fragment. Fragment is noncanon to the rest of the .hack series, old (2003?), and pretty much lacking in stor…
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Okay. Time to make a post on a conclusion/continuation of thoughts/responses. @sarrowsmith10 Those are some pretty solid plot points, right in there. However, there are no dragons. (MWAHAHAHAH.) okay maybe if I change my mind on the setting, maybe. Assuming I get that far. @Michelle Studied? Yes, bu…
Shaky hands/arms are good for backgrounds. Take Bob Ross's advice.
Ughhh. Okay, so... This intro doesn't work. Not only are there too many blank/confusing parts, the motives don't really work. Which means I either need to redo the intro, or add/remove something. so now i'm gonna list some options i have and hope that i get some feedback -Splitting the group up into…
Kinda gives me a vague pirates of the caribbean feel from just this. ...pretty good!
@MissMagicGirl Wow, I've seen you just about everywhere! I'm impressed with your dedication to these forums. A lot of these are some really neat examples, and I'm not sure which method works better. Me drawing out the actions, and then doing a personality around it, or extensive writing first. Ho…
Quick question about timing. So, I realize that a large amount of my story is... Grim. How do people usually decide to time their comic relief, and when to get serious again? As an example, I'm planning a scene where Joule loses a bet and has to wear a maid outfit. Where does that fit in the story? …
Baah! Progress is something that I can't lie, will be difficult to do. But, I didn't lie when I said I would try not to show the same scenarios multiple times; in partial to that problem. It's a hard case of "Storyline Bullshit" because I'm saying that memory is impossible to remove. On the other…
Phfoooooof. @joannekwan Okay, so, yes, multiple resets- at least 5, but not very quickly. Things will slow down a lot after the intro- an example of a "Worst" case scenario (but it's not, bwahahaha?) I do have a few vague endings in thought; but nothing I'm really confident in making concrete. @Mic…
Three does not work. I don't exactly understand emotions, but I do know that it'd be hard to work with the only people around being suspicious either one is a murderer. With three people, tensions get high, and murder happens faster than it should. Using myself is a bad example, but if I were innoce…
Whew, okay, long post No.2! Alright, so- the where part seems to be killing me a little; So I need to figure out the setting. I was hoping for a vaguely large place, like an abandoned skyscraper- that way I could fit in multiple facilities without the need to worry about running out of things to dra…
Neato! That last one reminds me of Soul to Call.
Holy fraggles, I didn't think I'd get this many replies! Thanks, guys- This is actually pretty useful stuff! I might just become a regular poster here, everyone has great ideas and advice! I've heard from both sides of my family that I might be getting a new scanner/drawing tablet; which is pretty a…
The art programs themselves aren't undetailed, but it's far harder to shade or change the size of a line as often as with pencil and paper. In other words, what I draw in Gimp would take me a few hours less in paper. I could have even drawn more! In other words, it's just... Inefficient, using a mou…
I just binge played a good portion of freedom wars, and it's given me a few ideas. all of these are some great suggestions, and I'll try to elaborate on them. *Glitches are a pretty high probability story wise, due to the nature of it all. It'd be a little boring if everything went to the plan of th…
Hrm, I've tried doing that (Sort of) similarly but some on a page and some on my computer. It sort of works, but I'm so indecisive, haha.