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If you want to add anything else to add, go ahead. And also sorry about my trash spelling haha. I use Grammarly though I'm unsure why there was so much. I'll probably get a proofreader though, I know some people I could ask!
Thanks for the review! And yeah English is my first language... haha- but I really appreciate this. This is the first time I've really tried writing a story before, and so my writing is still pretty sloppy. I'm going to completely rewrite the prologue since it's an introduction. So thanks for this!!…
Here's my story, "Blade of the Devil." It's about a world where some people are born with a special elemental ability, and about how those people use these abilities to combat against ancient oni, who threaten to destroy what humans have built up to this day. https://tapas.io/series/BotD/info
Hey I'm pretty new to Tapas and wanted to know what you guys think of my story so far! Any feedback is appreciated. https://tapas.io/episode/2036809