John536

John536

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Hello, if you are looking for dark novels then I recommend Not A Hero. I hope you like it.

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Yes, thank you for your comment. I will try to fix my shortcomings in the following chapters. Regarding spelling and description of space and characters. I wonder if there is any way to reduce eye strain when trying to check spelling? Since I'm not a native English speaker, it takes more time to …

Okay, I have completed 5 chapters. Here are my comments about this novel. First, I will praise your imagination for thinking of a dark future where the earth has now become a desert. I can also imagine the desolation of the places, accompanied by weapons straight from sci-fi novels. Second, the …

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

I just did =). I love slice of life.

Yes. Why not ? which one do you want me to sub ?

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Thanks for the feedback, I don't mind it at all so there's no need to worry about me getting angry. (Even though I have my profile picture as the angry face of facebook.) Anyway, you're right. I'm having some trouble transitioning the character's perspective. I tried to fix it in the following cha…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero. It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the …

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the h…

Hello, I will put the link of my work below. Not A Hero. It is a story about the main character's revenge against an 'organization' that took away his family. But the world he lives in isn't normal, so this won't be an ordinary revenge. On the way to achieving his goal, he will have to confront the …

Hello, I will leave the link of my novel below. If you're looking for a superhero themed series with a bit of darkness in it, then this might be for you. It's not perfect, but it's worth a try.