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Heres mine. Thanks Fore your help!
im the yellow dumpster. my ass always has to be the center of attention
Fat mood. It really be like that
I want to see the faces behind the writers uwu post your selfies below! [image]
Here's mine! It's also a detective novel with influences of psychological horror! I'll be sure to read yours in a bit!
So I've released quite a bit to my book and was wondering if anyone would be able to give me some positive or critical feedback. I just want to know how people genuinely feel about my story so far!
I just want to make some friends with fellow writers. My discord is Screaming Sarcasm#0392 Feel free to hit me up! I don't bite uwu
Ah that's a really good perspective to have! Definitely good advice
But I'm back now! I just uploaded the newest chapter to my series and should be posting again in a few days. Mental health has just been weighing me down a lot lately and with the grind that goes on with posting my story on here I can be left feeling a bit discouraged. Anyone reading, do you ever fe…
Ah I'm currently writing a mystery/horror novel with two detectives in a romantic relationship. It's already established, but the characters relationship is heavily developing and changing due to the events of the story. It's spooky, but it has its sweet moments between the two detectives as well ('…
LMAOOO or getting your toe stuck in a drain in the bath and being home alone for hours
I didn't expect y'all to believe it I thought it was obvious that I was shit posting
Sorry, the fear of people actually believing my father was a furry looking for twinks on Grindr was something I could not bare
40 year old businessmen* I like the high end shit
You caught me furry handed
I'm just trying to shit post in peace (':
I also caught my dad crying in a dog costume
I think my dad's a furry too
He's definitely getting a divorce )':
Omg I just found my dad's sex toy collection in his room. What do I do if he's a furry?
Major depressive disorder and generalized anxiety. Also have digestive issues likely linked to the disorders. I get so lazy and lack any motivation to do anything because of it and my anxiety causes me to question myself and my artistic ability. It's honestly awful and I know I pretty much only have…
So I was doing my normal grind on Grindr (you know how it be gay bois out there) and as I was scrolling through I was seeing a lot of h o t middle aged men uwu dont kinkshame me But then instead of finding a daddy for a good Saturday night I found my ACTUAL dad. My mom and dad have been married …
Ah thank you!! I appreciate it. And yeah the story is influenced by Japanese light novels/anime and their unique cinematic qualities. But the book is also influenced by Quentin Tarantino, Blade Runner, and American Neo noir. I try to balance the preferences. As far as Japanese people actually flirti…
Ah thank you for the advice and I'm glad you enjoyed some aspects of the novel so far! I'll look into fixing the errors and the more stiff moments in the novel.
It'll be a novel and roughly 4k words are posted so far! I'm mostly looking for general critique on the feels as you said, how one feels about the themes, atmosphere, characters, etc.
So I just finished posting the fourth part to my novel and it falls on a cliffhanger. I just want to see what you guys think of it this far. Critiques and compliments both welcomed! I'm looking to improve uwu Check out Flashing Lights on Tapas https://tapas.io/series/FlashingLights
Ah I'm the same way! I'm planning to get my degree in English when I start college so it'll be exciting to learn all of that
This can include independent works from places like Tapas or Webtoon and also famous literature. I personally have found The Picture Of Dorian Grey to be a favorite alongside The Great Gatsby for it's themes of over self indulgence, debauchery, and the way that material gain is used to numb and c…
This is why I prefer morally ambiguous characters with an open ended meaning to the story. We should work to present the ideas we are passionate about and start a discussion based around a concept, not tell the reader how they should feel about said concept.
Over The Moon by The Marias