Louvremusee
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I think his haircut is rad! Love his design. You did a great job on making a unique and memorable character, the others too!
Can you copy just the description and paste it here?
You're welcome! I'm glad you like it.
Of course you can share it! Don't worry about tagging me, just credit!
Here you go! [image]
Drew her! [image]
[image] Drew him!
Drew her! [image]
[image] Got one!
He's adorable! [image]
[image] Ernest, he's so charming lol
What does this mean? I don't see it under my post, does it mean something is up that I don't see? Sorry, I'm confused
I'll admit, I'm not good with drawing animals so I gota learn, but I need to do it so bad so I'll get it for you! It may just take me a bit longer because I want to get it as good as possible b4 showing it to you. Love your concept tho!
I need practice lol so I'll sketch your characters. I'll be doing either bust or full body, but if you haven't drawn them just give me a description of what they look like and I'll try to whip something up for you. I won't be able to get every single one of you but I'll damn well try. Also if I thin…
“A shy artsy girl meets a happy, extrovertet girl on a special schooltrip in italy. Over conversations on a balcony they become best friends and maybe more…” I like your description. It’s straight to the point and perfect without saying too much. The only thing I’d adjust is the rhythm and spelli…
“Cernia has fallen. Now a barren wasteland after the shriveling of the Tree of Life, the once thriving continent collapsed due to the lasting effects of the second demon war. Thirteen long years after this unprecedented disaster, Mancer finally gains the power to turn back time and rectify his mista…
Enjoyed it. Thanks for introducing me to your work! Most of it was solid, loved the world-building and small things peppered in there to really bring it to life, like how Mara says: “oh my Hades” instead of oh my god and the like. Pat yourself on the back, you should be proud! Your ideas were reall…
Woah. How is this one the least known out of all of them? After having read it, I’m pretty shocked. That was easily one of my favorites from this thread this far. Where do I start? First off, all the characters felt human. Immensely. When I was reading, I was pleasantly surprised about how it…
Thanks so much and I'll surely be getting around to it! I really enjoy critiquing. When I first started my writing journey, I never reached out for anyone for critiscism, so I began to develop a lot of bad habits that got worse and worse overtime that I seriously should've corrected, so I feel obli…
You're welcome! Your comic was very easy to fall in love with and very compelling. I'm happy I was able to help you! Happy writing to you, good luck!
Thank you so much for reading my critique and taking it into account, I also, again, appreciate you choosing to share your work with me! Your art was on the was on the way to looking very professional even then, you should be proud of yourself! You have something so poetic, so beautiful going on fo…
“The story talks about orwa bn laktham ,A great poet from the poets of Iraq, he was strong-willed, very intelligent, far from ambition, he left his city of Basra after he got fed up with the corruption that fills it, and swore to himself to take revenge on all tyrants and oppressors, to make his way…
“The Year is 57,750... And the Age of Outlawry has returned. The Intergalactic Federation, a tyrannical government that rules over the galaxy with an iron fist, seeks absolute control over the planets, crushing rebellion and resistance upon its might. But where there is oppression, there is defi…
This was heartwarming to read and I'll be glad to help where I can! Sure thing, I'd love to review your novel!
Aw you're welcome! I always try my best and I'm happy I could manage making my critique as helpful as possible! I'm also thrilled you found some great novels! I suggest giving them all a chance, it showed the creativity among people and helped inspire me to quit slacking and finish the stuff I was …
Wow, you’ve got such a beautiful art style and plot! Your color palette as well as your usage of bold black really helps to emphasize a lot of the points, giving it all a dramatic flair that’s typically difficult to achieve. You also have a lot of plot points that resonated with me, such as the s…
“Meteors falling from the sky signal more than just celestial beauty—they bring nightmarish towers swarming with demonic creatures. For Ryuujin Takahashi, who lost his only family to these dungeons, he discovers he has a rare power to fight back and search for clues to reunite with his family. Rec…
Of course! I'm happy that I was able to help you! You did a really good job, your world is very immersive and I can't help but outline again how good the chemistry and characters are! Yes! Thanks for the post!
I'm very happy I could help you! I wish you the best of luck and I'm excited to read your novel! You're welcome!
I get you completely, that's the same way I felt. Best way I can suggest is read it out to someone and see if they get it or read it over from the perspective of the audience as best as you can and see if that works! When I made the jump to trust the ready to put it together I was pretty nervous, b…