MeadowHaven
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is your offer still available
thank you everyone, these have been very helpful.
No, your advice is perfect. that other piece of advice was about my other story which has a very different vibe/flow. this series and especially this episode is meant to be a little scary so I actually think your sense of view is exactly what that story needs, as for the way you marked it up that wa…
yes this is still available, and i would like that.
update yesterday [image] [image]
@olivialanthemann @Harshitx @aquashark subbed if you can sub back
[image] [image] subbed, please sub back
[image] [image] just updated today
[image] [image] updated today
[image] [image] new chapter today
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Is it enough to hook people without directly revealing what is about to happen? is there enough foreshadowing? are the Characters relatable? grammar, I know it's a problem. i plan to go back and fix it later when I'm not behind my deadlines. is it compelling enough to keep reading be as negative a…
[image] [image] Episode 4, of Life Sentence: The Endless Game, released today.
[image] [image] NEW!! Episode 4, of Life Sentence: The Endless Game, just released today.
[image] [image] Episode 4, of Life Sentence: The Endless Game, just released today.
i hit the 25, now the much harder 100 is my next goal, but if i can at least get to 50 that would be nice too [image] [image]
S1 Morgan: loves pineapple pizza but hates mint chocolate ice-cream. she says the "chocolate" tastes like chalk. Luther: loves mint chocolate ice cream, but hates pineapple pizza. he says that its a crime against pineapples. (Luther and morgan often tease each other for these preferences) GM: will h…
[image] [image] @aquashark subbed let me know when you sub back, ill also sub to anyone who subs to me, just let me know.
i like to listen to music to get in the right mood while I'm writing. however, I'm about to start writing some more serious scenes that doesn't really match with my current music. If anyone has any good songs or playlists to recommend as references for capturing a tone of frantic desperation or whim…
@olivialanthemann congratulations, did you want to trade subs
I'm currently having a bit of a mental block with writing right now. I am behind my deadlines, so I need some constructive criticism to get my head back in the right place to write. so please anyone, criticizes my work!!
Luther plays a video game unaware of ominous foreshadowing in the background.
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literally the first chapter starts with a dream sequence that transitions into reality.
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thank you Bree, always good to hear from you. I was going for a bit of a slow burn type of thing, but if that messes with the pacing ill have to keep that in mind.
that is very helpful thank you. and don't worry I'm not offended it was exactly what I needed
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[image] [image] new release today
already subbed, but ill sub to anyone who subs tome, just let me know [image] [image]