Ninoo
Ninoo
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I'm a 17 years old story writer and I am currently writting a story for a manga about a boy who found out that his watch can stop time. I have all the main ideas written down and I am ready to put a lot of effort in this. It's a really long and complex story and could maybe be compared to death note…
OMG thx you so much for this feedback. I can see you really put effort on it which made me really happy. I will try my best to improve my manga from now on using this amazing feedback of yours. Like you even drawn one of my panel and placed pictures and all. im so suprise of all you did so again thx…
Oh dont worry about it. I already planned my whole story and how the world works so I think i might do something good. I hope xd.
Thx so much for the feedback, it helps me a lot to improve my work. (o:
Thx you so much for your feedback about thr panel being confusing maybe its because you didint read it the right way, you are suposed to read it from right to left because its a manga but idk maybe its still confusing sorry about that ill try to improve. For the art im trying a simplistic look but i…
My manga is called WATCH OUT. It's about a 17 year old boy who discovers that his watch can stop time. He will learn more about the watch everyday and he will soon found out that with great power comes great danger.
Not the best art but I think the most important is the story
This is the story of a 17 year old boy who discovers that his watch can stop time I would like to get feedback on it :3