Ninoo
Ninoo
Seems like you're off to a good start! I would focus on improving factors that will help your comic's legibility- most of my feedback revolves around that. Font Size: Much of the font in your comic is way way too small to read, easily at least. The number one thing that will turn someone off of …
That's a nice concept! But I don't know what you'll be focus on using the watch. Shounen Battle? Mystery? Romance? Horror?
Explore different creative ways of using the watch in daily lives. I hope you don't go straight on battle mode. That will kinda waste the potential, if you know what i mean? 
OK Your comic is actually not that bad! The panels flow and I can read fine. The only thing is sometimes the art is confusing on what it is I have to spend an extra 10 seconds saying, "Is that a watch or an eyeball?" But so far so good! Keep it up
So I will give my feedback as a reader: The organization of the panels is very confused, I couldn't understand the development of the story because of that. As you are publishing on a digital platform, one piece of advice is to try to design the panels in a vertical format, just like premium stories…
I enjoyed the read! Panel flow seems good and it's not hard to follow. I like the art style, simple but gets the job done. Especially when you focus in on character faces. I'm curious to see how you'll continue to develop it!