R.R.Raymonds
Ronald R. Raymond
Yes, only do one point of view per chapter. Otherwise it usually becomes a mess.
So I switch between 2 characters in my book. One idea is to start a new chapter each time you switch characters and make the chapter name the name of that character. Chapter 1: Character Name Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et …
Your writing is better. There are a few long winded sentences and typos though. You should ask a native English speaker to look over your drafts to tell you if anything sounds off. Overall, good work
I'm doing this in my story here on Tapas, and taking two very different paths in the same novel. The red/Ridge chapters follow a gang of 3 bad guys. Those are all written in 3rd person camera POV (this has a few names, camera makes the most literal sense), where you're not in anyone's head ever, a…
I will wait for your first chapter to see how you do it. Since I'm also having a few troubles with POVs.
When you work with multiple points of view, you lose the immediacy you have when there is only one. However, you do gain the advantage of creating a more complex work. The important thing is that each different point of view should help move the plot, and also illuminate, when possible, the other…
Btw, this switching is nothing special, maybe you're just overthinking it too. Maybe try putting here some example of what you're writing so people can help you out, because it's easier to find the problems (or their absence) when you see the actual text ^^
Have you checked out A song of Ice and Fire? =) Martin does this switching between his million of POVs pretty good.
Well, I'm being kinda shameless here. I began this Novel not long time ago, and I've been happy with the few Views and likes while writing. But it pains me to see that no one gave it a comment, I really wanted to know what are my readers thinking about it and I would accept any criticism that come…