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There actually was originally gonna be a scene were they got dolled up for the casino! I think it got cut for time though lol. Rose to me is kind of like an audience surrogate, she inspires him to become the hero she thought him to be at the beginning of the film but when Finn takes it too far and a…

I didn't say women were better writers than men. I also said that having no three movie plan was a mistake. Also it's nothing like Twilight.

Yeah I never got why they didn't go for CapxBW especially after winter soldier. A more realistic approach to romance with the characters starting as friends and going on adventures together, is pretty timeless and can be very sweet. (Spidey and MJ for example.) But that is a romance trope aimed way…

I think that's more George misunderstanding what his fans wanted than straight up lying but I do see your point. And I do agree that dark story elements are incredibly important to Star Wars and I think the reason for that is people want a story to take itself seriously. Both ROTS and the Clone Wars…

He called it a fairytale in context of why Jar Jar was created as comic relief or when speaking to Kasdan about killing off characters and his love of "Happily ever afters". That's not red herrings that's just his perspective on the series he created. I don't think George has ever been particularly …

George Lucas himself called Star wars a fairytale for children several times during the time of the prequel trilogy. Also there were literally no female writers on this trilogy: TFA was JJ Abrams and Lawrence Kasdan. TLJ was Rian Johnson( Though he did heavily consult the story group.) TROS was JJ …

Han wasn't her father figure, she was angry with his murder because a) They formed a friendship and b) her own shitty parents sold her into slavery and she was repressing that knowledge. Rey's happy go lucky nature is a mask, that was the point of the interrogation scene. Their first duel in the for…

As for reylo, I think The Last Jedi did a great job of setting up an intimate relationship between the two. They are isolated, lonely and afraid, with immense power, responsibility and expectation placed upon them. I think it makes sense that they would form this close bond, the problem is tros real…

They're not related, Palpatine orchestrating Anankin's birth was a just a huge fear of Anakin's. Matt Martin(one of the comic's writers) has confirmed this on his twitter, people are just taking panels out of context.

Here's mine: And my favourite:

Mine's is Fantasy/Action!

If you really want to skip the reconcilliation, you'd probably be better going with a more bittersweet, ambiguous ending with your characters not in a romantic relationship but with possibilty they could reconcile in the future. Otherwise I think people might be disappointed.

I'm pretty happy with how these turned out! [image] [image][image]

This is mine!

You could make the loss of their eyesight psychosomatic (caused by mental trauma). That way if you decide later you'd like to give them their vision back, you could do so in a meaningful way without it seeming cheap. Also I totally agree with the other users have said about foreshadowing.

This is my comic! It's fairly new with 8 episodes so far, so it's a quick read.

It's fairly new but I'm a big fan of Driver. The artwork is gorgous and has a great cyberpunk feel to it.

This is really cool! I especially like the monster design.

I'd recommend pretty much anything by composer Kenji Kawai. He composed for the original Ghost in the Shell movie, Higurashi no naku koro ni and most recently Mob Psycho 100.

I think people can be really self conscious in sharing the stuff they like, so are way more passive which can make the topic they are talking about not seem as interesting as a result, whereas negativity is way more acceptable, can be funny and shows a lot of passion behind their words. Which is why…

Thanks for the video, definitely a big help! Yeah I really should remember to flip the canvas more, it is really useful in identifying the flaws. Thanks again:)

For the first 3 episodes it was the traditional page format however I have since switched to vertical format. Just because I can get a better idea of the overall flow of the comic and it feels less constrained.

Yeah my linework can be a little messy and that is something I've been working on with the newer episodes. I never really noticed that the word balloons were a bit cluttered but I can totally see that now! I'll definitely try to fix that for future updates. Thanks for the feedback!

Hi guys my comics fairly new, with only six updates as of now. Would love to hear your feedback. Comic can be found here or mirrored here. Thanks so much.

[image] [image] Someone's about to get punched in mine!