New comic, would love feedback

[Tanzer]

Hi guys my comics fairly new, with only six updates as of now. Would love to hear your feedback. Comic can be found here or mirrored here. Thanks so much.

[GesuGesu]

Good art. Could be a bit more refined (line texture, straight lines when drawing artificial items like buildings, wonky facial anatomy) Below is a panel with noticeable wonky faces, particularly the left person.

Needs more space between words and edge of word bubble. Large text is fine, but make sure you have some white space left in the your speech bubbles. Here's the first one I noticed.

In general, webtoons made by professional studios in Korea have a lot more white space inside their word balloons to feel less cluttered.

Honestly though, I really applaud your background work! The scenery stands out far more than the character artwork itself! It's so incredibly detailed and your colour palette is an advantage in making the edges pop!

[Tanzer]

Yeah my linework can be a little messy and that is something I've been working on with the newer episodes. I never really noticed that the word balloons were a bit cluttered but I can totally see that now! I'll definitely try to fix that for future updates. Thanks for the feedback!

[GamerPrincessXI]

Your comic is great! So pretty

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[Tanzer]

For the first 3 episodes it was the traditional page format however I have since switched to vertical format. Just because I can get a better idea of the overall flow of the comic and it feels less constrained.

[CloudyMagpie]

So far it's looking really good! I agree your backgrounds and colors are probably the strongest(I struggle so hard with city scapes and geometric stuff). Your costume and overall character designs are really good and the story so far is intriguing, albeit a little difficult to follow,but I think most of my questions will be answered in the current flashback, so I'll wait. I also noticed some of the issues in your character anatomy, but even then, that isn't enough to detract from the story and the intrigue you have already set up. Most of the time the faces look perfectly fine, but I notice that when you have to tilt the heads at different angles, that's when you get some of your bigger issues coming through. Try flipping the canvas while you work (every digital artist's worst nightmare) and it'll help you spot odd looking faces. I'm also leaving this video here that might help you with practice. Anyway, I'm excited to see where your story goes :3 good luck!

[Tanzer]

Thanks for the video, definitely a big help! Yeah I really should remember to flip the canvas more, it is really useful in identifying the flaws. Thanks again:)