acazzola78
Squalo Di Terra
Man's Best Friend https://tapas.io/episode/2314775
Organic Sprouts Inc. https://tapas.io/episode/2314873
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Thanks for reading my story and giving critique. It is much appreciated. While the writing is admittedly amateur, as long as you guys were entertained, I am happy. This story, and my other one, were supposed to be comics initially.
Please review my short story.
I don't know. But your story Larvae is pretty cool.
That's a good point. The achievement cannot be taken away. But what if the person is not living up to black belt standards? Is he currently a black belt or he WAS a black belt? I ask because my sensei is out of shape, has a bad back and is always sitting while instructing us. The knowledge is ther…
If someone achieves a black belt in a martial art but then eventually stops training and let's themselves go, can no longer do a roundhouse, becomes fat etc., are they still considered a black belt in their discipline? Or is it an ongoing process?
First thing, you should have posted a link to your story in this thread. You could also try to promote on the many promotion threads in the forum.
GeGeGe No Kitaro. Very wholesome and sometimes deep. Plenty of action scenes. Some beautiful episodes, especially in the early seasons, that had patriotic, nationalist themes. In the end, you could see outside influences were directing the narrative and one episode even attacked Japanese society…
I came here to publish my two stories and then found so many cool novels and comics. So for me it's both.
This story takes place in a dystopia and contains aliens and violence. Any feedback?
Hope you all like it. Feel free to give advice and feel free to promote your own as well.
I found it. On another forum. Sorry for being the village idiot and wasting yours and others time. I was concerned that this forum would remove a moderately controversial thread.
I posted there a few days ago. It should still be active. The thread starter was very knowledgeable and seemed quite intelligent.
There was a great thread where the starter would answer any questions related to history and past civilizations. It was so interesting. Where is it?
Here are pictures from my short story book. It's about a college student and an unexpected friend. [image] [image]
Hopefully you all enjoy it. Feel free to criticize or give advice.