hgwilliams98
Toni Williams
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@NovaSapien So sorry for not responding for such a long time, school's just starting where I'm at and it's crazy here lol But thanks for the opportunity! I thought that you most likely had improved with your writing since then, and I don't have a problem with reading your other writing for you, too!…
Here's your review, buddy! Sorry it took me so long! Grammar: You guys write too good for me to have this category here. Characterization: So these might be some of my favorite characters that I've read for a while? They're written exactly as how they should (not too much prose, but enough m…
Here's your review, buddy! Grammar: Again, not really a problem here. I'm starting to think that there must've been a serious problem on Wattpad, or something, because normally by now, I would have come across something. I'm pretty sure even I have a mistake or two, but I'm not seeing anything …
@CarltonIsaac Here's your review for the first chapter of "Destiny's Beckoning", buddy! Grammar: No problem here, as usual. To be honest, I really shouldn't review based on this, as I've noticed that many stories on Tapas don't suffer from this problem like they do on Wattpad. Maybe because of the…
Five works, thank you! I'll be publishing both reviews today, too!
No problem! I'm about to go to bed, but I'll go ahead and at least read the first five chapters for ya, then post your review first thing in the morning. I'll be at the library all day anyway so free wifi lol
Do you mean the episode that you linked you want me to review, or would you like me to read a few of them like I'm doing with @NovaSapien? I'm good either way! 
Thank you so much for this, truly! Slow pacing has always been my fear since I've rewritten it, as I did know that its original moved waaay too fast. But definitely tighten things up and shorten things out, that's definitely a given lol Thank you for this!
Ooo, yes, that'll be nice! Fantasy's my favorite genre and your story really has me interested, I'll be commenting asap! 
Sure thing! 33k+ words is a bit much for at once, but I'm fine with doing the individual episodes that you mentioned, that's not a problem at all! Which ones would you like for me to read?
My pleasure! At first, I didn't know if I should have said what I said because I thought that the problems actually didn't exist, and that had I read an earlier chapter or two, it would have explained that. If that's the case though, I'm more than happy to do a re-review, if you'd like?
Would love a short review from you and I'll return the favour on one of your chapters. Cheers! So I always like to write my reviews in three stages: Grammar, Characterization, and finally, Overall Story. That way, each section is given their own time to be focused on with no overlap, not to m…
Oh sorry about that lol Will do!
Sure thing! Which chapter(s) would you like for me to read?
Hi there! Although I've been on Tapas for almost two years, I haven't been an active creator on the site until last December. Before that, however, I was crazy active on Wattpad, where, besides writing several stories, I also reviewed others' books, many in particular young, fresh writers. I wante…
“I didn’t bring him to camp,” she corrected him. “I deliberately stopped outside of the borderline and waited for a Guardian patrol to come find us. I thought that they would take him back to whichever pit he crawled out of. Instead, them and their two-bit mutts snitched on me.”
Francine is different. Not in the sense that she has freckles on her nose or dual-colored eyes, but in the fact that she has antlers growing from her head, an immeasurable amount of strength, and no clue where she came from. She doesn’t even have a last name. Nevertheless, she is shunned by the co…
Here is my novel, which is a modern retelling of Greek Mythology! Most of the main cast are POC and LGBTQ+, which themes ranging from love and acceptance to mental illness and physical disabilities. Right now, there are only four chapters, with the next update coming out early this week, so there's …