lettusbear
Lettus & Bear
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Hey guys, we're Letty and Akirus, aspiring creators working together on our webcomic, Flames of Tranquility.
- Joined
- Jul 15, '18
- Last Post
- Jul 20, '18
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- Jul 30, '18
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Hi wufargia, sorry for taking a while to get around to reading your comic. I'm really impressed! Here are a few thoughts: The script is written with natural dialogue and solid editing. Very few mistakes I picked up in five full chapters, which is great. Thought I'd point out this one, just in cas…
Thanks for taking the time to write this, Carrie. Since its come up a few times, I just want to say some general words on historicity in fiction. This isn't meant as an excuse for ourselves, since there are definitely things we would have preferred to do more thoroughly but couldn't due to time c…
I'll give it a shot! Although of the 20-25 people I originally followed, I only have 1 follower in return. 
Wasn't fishing for them, though; just followed people whose tweets/work I like. I will try to go about it more thoroughly with your tips, thanks.
Thanks for reading! I went through all of the chapters you've posted so far, here are some thoughts: I like the black/white scheme. It really suits the style of your comic! The pacing is a lot better after you optimized it. While it is possible to go overboard, perhaps expand the 'range' of gutt…
Looks promising, I subscribed so I can read more when I have the time! I'm a fan of the unique art style; it's very aesthetically pleasing to my eye.
Hi Chita, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! After reading through a few chapters of yours, here are mine: As I wrote in one of my previous posts, I'm really not a fan of infodump-style prologues, irrespective of medium. Let me elaborate a little, since I'm posting about it twice. I kno…
Our webcomic Flames of Tranquility is based on the late Han Dynasty/Three Kingdoms era. The current story arc will follow the exploits of Sun Ce in his campaigns to subdue the Jiangdong region. Unlike a lot of modern 3K adaptations in media, I'm referencing historical records of the time rather th…
Thanks for your feedback! Summary definitely could use a revision, I've never been quite satisfied with it. Here are some quick thoughts on your comic: Personally, I'm not a big fan of infodump-style prologues and openings. I think you're better off starting with a stronger hook to get readers…
Thanks for your feedback, wumblebumarts! Sorry for taking a while to respond. Here's Letty's 2 cents after having a read through your comic: Your art has definitely improved from the first few pages! I wanted to give you my thoughts mostly from late chapter 3 since it's most recent and consistent …
Interesting, is the difference due solely to the type of audience? The format of Tapas and Webtoons seems quite similar to me. I've heard some people like to post their work pages at a time, but from my perspective, it seems like it would get annoying (if I were to put myself in the shoes of a fan/r…
We started writing our comic using the contest as a way to set milestones and deadlines to motivate ourselves, rather than as an end goal. While it would be nice to win, it's obviously going to be difficult if you're a new creator and 40% of the criteria is 'audience engagement'. For us, it's mor…
Hi Tapas, we're Letty and Akirus. We posted the first episode of our comic Flames of Tranquility yesterday and got a whole 8 views. It's rough being a new creator, huh? We spent over a month laboring on this one so we'd love for more people to see it. With that in mind, if our comic interests you, g…
Hey guys, we're Letty and Akirus. We just posted the first episode of our new comic, Flames of Tranquility; looking forward to being part of the community! Flames of Tranquility is a historical fiction loosely based on the Three Kingdoms era. It's sourced more from historical and academic records…