15-minutes reviews! [Currently reviewing but feel free to drop your link]

[DualDragons]

Alright, time to review Destinies of Glazed!

Grammar/writing
Imma be honest, I had mixed thoughts when I started this. The action really gave me a shonen vibe there which I like!

I was greeted with a few lines that weren't completely correct in terms of grammar though, which may be a turn-off.
I think the way you approach the fight scenes is solid enough though. But make sure to let a second person read over it for the grammar.

Plot:
While I'm generally not a fan of power levels (I ranted about that in another thread yesterday) I think your premise of having the hierarchy based on power levels is interesting. And having your mc's fight against the abusers of that system is a neat way of incorporating that system in your story.
I haven't read far enough to discover if there's a antagonist but that could raise the stakes even more.

Overall, while there are some minor turnoffs for me, I think your premise works well enough for me!

[Darth_Biomech]

Hello, thanks in advance!

Leaving The Cradle Webcomic

[Andrealove20]

hi and thanks for your kindness

Long Gone | Tapas

[Philomartina]

That's awesome, I'd be very happy to hear your thoughts. No pressure though, do as much as you like or skip.

Necromant | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Aight, I'll do some more this evening (gotta work on those pages sometime)

[Mxhannadi]

Thank you for this. It's all about having a good time
Here is mine

Justice in the Wasteland

[DualDragons]

Sorry dude, I already reviewed yours awhile back

@Darth_Biomech alright, that was a faster than expected. I expected something like 13 chapters already haha Before I begin, may I just say that it's extremely cool to have a own website for the comic? It looks rather polished as well. Art talk: Your art is very polished in my opinion. Which also makes it hard for me considering you outstrip me far in terms of art quality . Only thing I would like to point out, and that didn't happen often, is that the text bubble…

[Dysis]

Hey that's a good idea! I've received one feedback so far and that too via a DM so I'm pretty new to this. Aaand quite nervous.

Thank you again!

Time Out | Tapas

[RainbowCat]

Here's my novel (if you don't review novels, just skip my post, I wasn't sure if you do comics and novels or not ) I'm not sure how far you'll get in 15 minutes so if you could please tell me which chapter you stopped at, that'd be great! Thank you

Dreams and Nightmares | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Sorry, I already reviewed yours awhile back as well

Alright, it's time for Dreams and Nightmares! I'll be honest with you, this was a hard read for me . Romance as a standalone genre is not really something I like to read in general for personal past reasons (though in this case I haven't seen much of it because... I couldn't find it? Correct me if I'm wrong, but it may be one of those stories where the romance grows slowly ). That and the constant trauma train (which was a similar thing to a element that caused me to lose …

[ItsAvocadoToast]

This is a rather short comedy series, and its a comic!
12 Episodes of an Avocado Toast and his life: Here's Avocados And Toast!

Avocados And Toast | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Actually, let's give this a try.
Newcomers must give me the password in the original post on top of the thread to make sure that they read it and the rules

(Doesn't apply to everyone who already replied to the thread)

[RainbowCat]

Omg so sorry I didn't recognize you because you changed your profile picture and I thought your username just sounded familiar because I've seen you around

[DualDragons]

Nah, no problem. Yeah, I do sometimes change profile pics xd

[Darth_Biomech]

Ah, sorry. I had a suspicion...

[mcarrowolga]

The password: friens ("friends" but missing "d"? A typo?)

Here's my illustrated novel:

Cold Obsidian | Tapas

Would love to know what you think of it

[surenlicious]

Did you ever do mine? Feel free to skip my arse if you did, I honestly cannot recall. It's a novel, I make art for it, there's a fuckload of lore everywhere but you can always dive in blind. Lemme know if you need something extra.

Also friens

Jade Kingdoms | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Nah, it's not a typo on my part. Anyone who was in the spambot invasion this year will know what I mean xD

[lindanimated]

Hello, friens!

If you'd like to take a look at my comic, here it is:

The Cursed Vermeulen | Tapas

There's not much yet, so it shouldn't take more than several minutes to read.

Thank you!

[Messaff]

Here is mine. I really need some feedback on where I can improve

Its about a guy who wants to start a business as a demon hunter in a world where no one knows that they exist.
Right now in the story Aki, the protagonist, is taking on a demon way stronger then any before with the help of someone who may have the same powers as him.

A new chapter will come out tomorrow.

Double Crimson | Tapas

Password is Friens (friends without a d?)