15-minutes reviews! [Currently reviewing but feel free to drop your link]

[MegaRay]

I don't think you reviewed my work before. But hey, if you did, skip my post

Shaman Shepard | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Wow, it actually didn't take me that long to read it haha

Anyways, it's time to review Shaman Shepard!
Art talk:
The art is really clean! There are very little moments where I thought "hmmm, that expression or pose looks awkward". Well done!
The scroll format works well for your comic too.

Plot:
I think you've set up a neat power system that kinda reminds me of the stands in JoJo's Bizarre Adventure. The idea of spirits and shaman feels good and you did a neat job on showing it in the prologue without leaving a lore dump.
The dialogue and characters feel natural enough for me.

As for the plot, I can't guess too much because you only have 8 episodes, but so far it seems to be consistent and I don't see any plot holes really. Keep it up!

Overall, I think your work is very solid! My advice is to just keep going. also that may be why I subbed hehe

[Tamaki_Leon]

Heya! I hope for a short review, just your thoughts on the premise and characters :3

Destinies of Glazed | Tapas

[MegaRay]

Yeah, I hate lore dump, so I tried to prevent that.

Good to know the dialouges feel natural. Reworked that dozen times XD

Thanks <3

[DualDragons]

Same here, lore dump is such a turnoff xD

[Chopythes]

Mine might be rather long, so feel free to skip it!
I'd love to hear your thoughts tho, but I completely understand if it's too much, haha <3

Heritage | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Alright, time to review Destinies of Glazed!

Grammar/writing
Imma be honest, I had mixed thoughts when I started this. The action really gave me a shonen vibe there which I like!

I was greeted with a few lines that weren't completely correct in terms of grammar though, which may be a turn-off.
I think the way you approach the fight scenes is solid enough though. But make sure to let a second person read over it for the grammar.

Plot:
While I'm generally not a fan of power levels (I ranted about that in another thread yesterday) I think your premise of having the hierarchy based on power levels is interesting. And having your mc's fight against the abusers of that system is a neat way of incorporating that system in your story.
I haven't read far enough to discover if there's a antagonist but that could raise the stakes even more.

Overall, while there are some minor turnoffs for me, I think your premise works well enough for me!

[Darth_Biomech]

Hello, thanks in advance!

Leaving The Cradle Webcomic

[Andrealove20]

hi and thanks for your kindness

Long Gone | Tapas

[Philomartina]

That's awesome, I'd be very happy to hear your thoughts. No pressure though, do as much as you like or skip.

Necromant | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Aight, I'll do some more this evening (gotta work on those pages sometime)

[Mxhannadi]

Thank you for this. It's all about having a good time
Here is mine

Justice in the Wasteland

[DualDragons]

Sorry dude, I already reviewed yours awhile back

@Darth_Biomech alright, that was a faster than expected. I expected something like 13 chapters already haha Before I begin, may I just say that it's extremely cool to have a own website for the comic? It looks rather polished as well. Art talk: Your art is very polished in my opinion. Which also makes it hard for me considering you outstrip me far in terms of art quality . Only thing I would like to point out, and that didn't happen often, is that the text bubble…

[Dysis]

Hey that's a good idea! I've received one feedback so far and that too via a DM so I'm pretty new to this. Aaand quite nervous.

Thank you again!

Time Out | Tapas

[RainbowCat]

Here's my novel (if you don't review novels, just skip my post, I wasn't sure if you do comics and novels or not ) I'm not sure how far you'll get in 15 minutes so if you could please tell me which chapter you stopped at, that'd be great! Thank you

Dreams and Nightmares | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Sorry, I already reviewed yours awhile back as well

Alright, it's time for Dreams and Nightmares! I'll be honest with you, this was a hard read for me . Romance as a standalone genre is not really something I like to read in general for personal past reasons (though in this case I haven't seen much of it because... I couldn't find it? Correct me if I'm wrong, but it may be one of those stories where the romance grows slowly ). That and the constant trauma train (which was a similar thing to a element that caused me to lose …

[ItsAvocadoToast]

This is a rather short comedy series, and its a comic!
12 Episodes of an Avocado Toast and his life: Here's Avocados And Toast!

Avocados And Toast | Tapas

[DualDragons]

Actually, let's give this a try.
Newcomers must give me the password in the original post on top of the thread to make sure that they read it and the rules

(Doesn't apply to everyone who already replied to the thread)

[RainbowCat]

Omg so sorry I didn't recognize you because you changed your profile picture and I thought your username just sounded familiar because I've seen you around

[DualDragons]

Nah, no problem. Yeah, I do sometimes change profile pics xd