Hmm, her boobs should have been compressed with the hug (supposedly frontal), anyway, the info was not really written, only suggested, so, I guess, it's up to the penciller interpretation
No, IĀ“m happy that you write that, I will change that panel and make him hug frontal
So many things to draw (or to imagine)
@miuthecat sketch of @c6139057 's script.
Man Rat: Hey Peter! This fight is for the birds!One of the Birds Men: John Boy! Never thought Iād see you in da rat race!
@justincarbunkle: Dont understand these lines, the rat says the victory is for the opponent? Also how come the rat knows one of the bird's men?
@miuthecat āFor the birdsā is an idiom which means something is trivial, worthless, or unimportant. Man Rat is saying facetiously that the fight is worthless because his opponent is a bird, using an expression that uses the word bird.
They knew each other in high school.
This is the first day of the sketching phase. The deadline is on sunday october 12 and then theinking phase starts. Let us know if you run into problems and if you need help.
Kindda having a hard time imagining this, posting a draft here to get the scripter's feedback.
Shots + layout look good. I think you got the ideas right.
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Here's my sketch for @c6139057 from @Lensing's script! Wanted to finish it now since I won't have my graphics tablet until Sunday Tried to make it more cartoony but it didnāt really come out that way lol sorry
This is amazing and I love it, you donĀ“t have to worry about it not being cartoony enough because the style looks great
I feel confused at times, so, I created a memo table for consult, since we need to work on all stories and all roles, it's a must to have a guide:
thank you so much!! i'm really glad you liked it
I love everything about it. ItĀ“s the first time someone ever drew a script that I wroteand I didnĀ“t know how great this would feel.
ok, this is "Bird-men vs men rat (Script 5)" pencils for @Lensing:
3 days left for the sketch. Then the inking phase starts.
I have one question for @justincarbunkle about the speech bubble in thelast panel. Does the rat speak or does the man rat speak?
Iām so glad! Itās my first time doing this and making a comic page too, so Iām really happy that you like it
Man Rat.
@miuthecat Lovin' the buff shirtless men + detail.
If it's the man controlling the rats, then it's rat man, and not man rat
