8-Ball Shuffle intro and critique please!

[NeonBagel]

I have recently started my comic 8-Ball Shuffle which is about people who have powers based on board games, card games and children's games and I would love some critique and some sort of criticism please to know whether or not I am running my comic well. Here's a link. Thank you guys!

[JKNNKL]

Hey there!! I think this comic has a lot of potential and it's a really interesting premise! I think you'll probably get more helpful critique if it had more pages but I'll say what I feel so far :>

story: there's not much to talk about plotwise for now but i think the world is interesting in a slightly silly way : 9 if you go the comedy/action-comedy route i will definitely be sticking around!! with this world it would be nice if you went for the light-hearted adventure time-ish tone with silly non-dangerous villains and low stakes conflict but that's just me : p

characters: i think the mc is very unique i really like how you didn't go for a typical look!! char design is pretty on point so i can't wait to see what other game inspired characters you come up with in the future

art: cute but doesn't seem very stable, but there's nothing much that i can feedback cuz it'll naturally get better if you practice a lot, jiayou!! the only thing standing out to me is the colors are a bit too saturated, but don't tone it down too much because i think it fits the world. adventure time level of color brightness would be great : D

also i like your pacing and dialogue, especially the last page. idk why but it really piqued my interest for some reason! good luck for your comic, keep workin on it!! it looks like it has a bright future hehe

[NeonBagel]

Thank you! I'm just trying to pump out pages of the comic as soon as I can to get the first episode out that'll explain what's to come ahead and set up the world. Thank you for the criticism!

[KoreanTacos]

I think it's alright, but I 'm guessing you're still working on more pages so I won't say much. I think the art is unique, and I kind of got a Bojack Horseman vibe out of it. I would have to see a little more of this to really give a real critique.

[NeonBagel]

Thanks! I can see what you mean by the Bojack Horseman vibe from the city sort of atmosphere and the colors. I really appreciate you taking time and reviewing what I have so far!