Hello and welcome!
Art in your comics definitely looks good, especially backgrounds. Their color gamma is very consistent and pleasurable for eyes, and create atmosphere well.
What I didn't like so much, is that art style and vibe of this comics are too similar to popular mainstream ones,. Their influence on your work is too strongly noticeable, at least, for me. I recognize, that it can be very useful to learn from professionals and adopt something, which you like in their works, to your own work. But your comics look a bit restricted with what you've seen in mainstream webcomics format, like you hesitate to stand back too far from canons, which they have established (at least, it looks so for me; I'm sorry if I'm wrong).
It will be great, if you will allow yourself to experiment, and will work out your own, more recognizable and authentic style with time.
Also one more note, if you don't mind...
I'm not a native speaker, but, nevertheless, I have been able to notice some small grammar mistake in the second issue: you wrote "ofcourse!" instead of "of course!" a couple of times.
Also this phrase in the description looks a bit weird: "Two strangers with different world". Did you actually mean "with (or maybe from) different worlds", i.e. in plural, like, they have worlds which are different from each other?
Hope it was helpful. Good luck with your creative work!