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Apr 2021

Hey there! I'm black/Dominican, and you might not know it by the fact that he's so pale, but the main character of my comic is too! Hope you enjoy!


Thanks for your feedback! I'll update the fonts! I even thought they were too large for the usual standards I saw, but I'll correct that! I am glad you pointed it out, I confess I was struggling with the fonts myself, but I couldn't put a finger on what was the problem exactly (I am short-sighted, but my degree is meager and my lenses can correct it as if I had a 20/20 vision). I changed my setup too, so the images may now come better than they were!

I live outside of America and my novel will have future LGBT characters but I have just started writing it so they haven't been mentioned yet!
If this is a problem let me know and I'll delete my comment if it doesn't count as very diverse, if it doesn't I apologise also if it isn't can I get advice on how I can make it more diverse for future chapters?

My novel The Magic in Us features an Asian main character. It’s a GL book about friendship, love, growing up, and fighting monsters as a magical girl.

My main characters are pretty diverse I'd say! Bipoc, lgbtq and neurodivergent, plus one has a prosthesis!
Hope you'll like it!

Hi there! I'm from latin america and so are most of my characters. I write queer YA content that deals with mental health care and self-discovery. :blush:

Thanks! I read the first chapter and it's clear how you're trying to build tension in terms of what the main character is experiencing. I would just watch your punctuation and look into showing vs telling - I think this will help your writing become stronger. Cheers!

Your comic is so sweet! I like it, the range of characters, the dialogue, the art and story - it all comes together so nicely. I love how you have so many people represented in your work in a way centers who they are (aka people are more than their labels). Subbed!

I really enjoyed this (and subbed). You can feel Mia's anxiety, I think you've really mastered that part (I suffer from anxiety). I can't wait to see how the rest of Mia's journey goes, reading those exam descriptions reminded me I really should stop slacking lol.

These are so funny! My dad is also Black and very pale (i.e. "White passing"). It's beautiful that our people come in all skin, hair, and eye colour types. :slight_smile:

Nice! There are strong thriller elements in your writing too, I really enjoyed chapter 2 and how you describe all the haste and tension with Kayla and the book. I'd just add more descriptions about the atmosphere but (genuine question, no offense intended)--is it a letter someone found and is reading or is it a third-person description of what's actually going on?

Thanks for sharing and keep using your writing to shatter stereotypes. I hear that TV show "Bridgerton" (written by a Black woman) also has this "erasure" aspect you mentioned. I wouldn't call it erasure though, give yourself more credit. I'd call it "re-imagining".

Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! There's more atmosphere / description in the following scenes! That one was just meant to be tense, so I kept it a bit more sparse, but will keep that in mind for future revisions, thank you!

The prologue is epistolary i.e., it's the page of a diary, and there will be other such documents scattered throughout the series: letters, book fragments, ancient myths, etc. But the "days" or actual chapters are happening "in real time", like a regular story. (And don't worry, no offense taken!)

A diverse BL harem-style story featuring werewolves and vampires.

Thank you!
I have been struggling with that so it's good to hear it from someone else :smile:

I have a lot of LGBT+ characters (most of the main cast and a good chunk of the supporting characters, as well) and my main character suffers with mental illnesses and a fluctuating disability due to injury and trauma.

Oh my goodness, thank you so much for your kind comments! (Apologies also for the late reply)